| Reviews for King's Second Wife |
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   liela-k chapter 3 . 9/21/2019 I don't like bella's parents... I'm going to need bella to be a little more assertive. |
| trekgeezer chapter 3 . 9/21/2019 Very interesting story. I look forward to more. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/20/2019 Don't get it, why Renee had to slap Bella for no reason, make no sense to add that part in the story... |
| snoopylover60 chapter 3 . 9/20/2019 I like the story, I hope you get help from a beta or proof reader soon. |
| snoopylover60 chapter 2 . 9/20/2019 Why did Renee slap her? She was on the move. If she wants her to wed the king. Seems like the last thing she'd want is a hand print on her face? |
| slpmom chapter 2 . 9/20/2019 Thanks for the chapter! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/24/2019 Did anyone even read this all the way through? I don't see how they could when you literally have to break down each sentence to figure out what you're TRYING to say. The grammar is so bad, I just cant possibly read anymore of this garbage. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2019 The grammar is SOOOOOOO BAD! It really just ruins the story. Why didn't you have someone edit this for you? It was a mistake not to. And if you did...which I doubt...they did a shit job. |
| liela-k chapter 5 . 6/16/2019 thanks cant wait to read more |
| acw1 chapter 5 . 6/15/2019 :) |
| snoopylover60 chapter 5 . 6/14/2019 So are they working for stuff for Roses wedding? Or are they being sly and working for stuff for Bella to? |
| liela-k chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 aww poor leah why did Edward leave angry. she really needs support right now! |
| snoopylover60 chapter 4 . 6/9/2019 I am loving this... He is not to broken up about Leah, but marriages of convenience have to be hard. Looking forward to more :D |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/10/2019 Good start... so Edward is much older than Isabella since he already had several children ... Thanks |
| bobbysgirl1976 chapter 3 . 3/9/2019 GOOD CHAPTER BUT I'M A GREEDY READER...LONGER CHAPTERS WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED. |
