Reviews for A Better Path
Ninja65 chapter 32 . 7/17
I think the summons should be something to match Narutos personality and elements , so I think either Big Cats or Manta Ray's because they would match with him on both fronts because cats can fit any element and personality and Rays for the thematic aquatic theme with him and his history as a character
Guest chapter 32 . 6/29
Please update this fanfiction
kanjichibi chapter 9 . 6/30
Good chapter, a bit weird with all the gender swap characters.
kanjichibi chapter 2 . 6/30
Good chapter.
kanjichibi chapter 1 . 6/30
A really good start to the story. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
I really like the characterization of Naruto and Amagi, both characters seem realistic and grounded.
Guest chapter 32 . 6/28
Please continue this fanfiction.
Guest chapter 32 . 6/16
Will Haku join some missions in the future? Like being a part of the Land of Snow Mission? Hidden Star village mission? Or make an arc that involves Haku?
PenDoTyrne chapter 16 . 6/14
While that argument is sound, Shadow Clone is just a jutsu that anyone can use. So, they already have the advantage of Chakra returning to them, which brings the experiences. Jutsu aren't meant to evolve with a person, a person evolves a Jutsu, which in turn gets used effectively and efficiently. That's the theory behind Jutsu. So it's kinda stupid if you want to hold back a Jutsu from functioning as it should just to insert it into the plot. That makes it a plot hole... Good luck.
HellsMaji chapter 13 . 6/7
Infinitely stronger than canon Naruto, but he acted way more like a scared pussy with kyuubi than canon Naruto did. You said you wanted his first meeting with kyuubi to set the tone for future interactions.. I guess that means Naruto is always going to be a scared, speechless puss in front of him?
Anonymous chapter 32 . 6/1
I know dragons but what are komodo dragons? But dragons all the way!
NaruCrazy chapter 29 . 5/30
I hope you are not going to write about Risa vs Lee, specially if Risa wins and Lee gets his arm and leg crushed. The fic while written well is too canon, apart from gender bender for harem purpose. By canon I mean events rather than the characters. So as a result if I skip over some dialogue I dont miss anything and still get the gist of what is happening cuz it is as I said canon. You created an opportunity to branch out by saving Haku but she has become a house wife (and harem member) and hence inconsequential to the events/story.
powermachine79 chapter 32 . 5/26
Komodo dragons sounds fun. Looking forward to reading more :-)
axethered chapter 16 . 5/24
Word choices: Comradery isn't a word; use camaraderie instead.

Also, Smaug (the dragon in the Hobbit) had a hoard of gold; Genghis Khan led a horde of mongols. See the difference?

Other than that, good story so far. Keep it up.
axethered chapter 15 . 5/24
Oddly enough I think Orochimaru had started jumping bodies and was in one that was female during his confrontation with Hiruzen at the chuunin exam finals in canon. Please don't take that as any sort of indication I would like to see Orochimaru paired with Naruto. Yeesh. I cringed just typing that.
FrostFriday chapter 32 . 5/23
Just marathon'd this story, and I gotta say that your description of it was spot on. "Starts out shaky, but gets better in later chapters." Despite the re-hashing of canon events for the umpteenth time, you've managed to do it in such a way that it is relatively unique. I especially like the more confident Hinata. That's always nice to see.
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