Glad Hermione and Harry got together. Thanks for writing.

Decided to read this fic bcoz I absolutely loved the WIP fic of yours and was probably the best decision I made today... Keep writing as you are very good at this

xxxxx KUDOS xxxxx

And now I’m upset Harry didn’t want to be in the tournament at all

It’s disappointing that, aside from his relationship with Hermione and his friendship with Ron, the story went exactly the same way. I was expecting him to be more proactive and since she was more involved, her observations would lead to some changes. Like actually finding out a method to breathe underwater earlier and being more prepared. Being at least a little suspicious of Moody’s uncharacteristic and entirely convenient lending of just the book they’d need to Neville. The list goes on. But it all went the same.

is there any chance of u continuing this story? it felt rushed towards the end but very well written all in enjoyed it

It's good but how further it's read how more rushed it is. And should have little epilogue at the end how h/hr after school still together and stuff.
Cause i am really curious if they still go to the burrow or want contact with 3 of them, also back to dursley's? why not go with hermione.

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Agree with you on that. Hermione the Best!

Awesome story I am hooked and cannot wait to see what happens next. I agree with you Hermione would have been picked if she entered. That would be a amazing story to read Hermione getting picked for GOF!

I enjoyed your short story very much. The only complaint I have is that I wanted more! Thanks for sharing your take on 4th year. Hope to read more of your work soon.

Thanks for this story! The beginning is really strong. I liked that best. You wrote a nice version of their friendship and I can see their relation shift just the way you described due to some small changes of details.

The further down I scrolled the more rushed your story felt. It was still good but not as good as the beginning. Maybe you could have skipped some more details about the tasks or the aftermath and replacing them with one last dialogue between Hermione and Harry.

Of course it would. Her and Harry together are an unbeatable team. But I'm confused, this is exactly what happened isn't it. Surely Harry took his closest friend to the ball and spending a year so close allowed them to realize their feelings for each other. Nothing else could possibly be the truth. Great work.

I enjoyed this very much. Thank you!

Bring us, ANOTHER SHRUBBERY!