Excellent!

Perfect and sweet!

I loved this. Thank you. :)

Awesome
Thank you
You could definitely create a longer story
Kudos

I loved it! So cute! Thank you for sharing

Ho there, my sweet pie! Awesome oneshot. It wasn't rushed nor was it too dragged. It had the perfect balance of the interesting factor of a plot and the single chapter of a oneshot.
As an author myself, I know it's no easy task. Congratulations for the job well done if you tried it, and congratulations for your amazing skills if you had no idea what you were doing, yet made it so awesome. Regardless, it was a great job, and congratulations. I hope to read more from you.
PS: A tip (not to be taken as truth nor to be done like I'm about to say just because I said so. Remember: There are no rules in writing other than the language itself, and even that can be bent to your imagination) from a friend. Sometimes a paragraph that is too big - more than 55 words or something like that - can seem intimidating to readers. I personally don't mind it, but I've heard complains.

Anyway, big thanks for the read, and sorry for not actually being logged in. Forgot my pass the :p

Hope to hear from you soon.
Zvezda Kuerten out.

one word: more!

This is so cute! You should totally keep going! Maybe a 5 chapter series or more? Like with random moments from then on? Some fluff here... some drama there... that ends up in fluff... smutt if you re comfortable writing it...

I'd totally be okay with making this into a 5 or 10 chapter series. There could be fluffy and sexy moments, or there could be angst and drama. I enjoy the set up, but it could definitely expand. Maybe a rewrite? Peas and Carrots!

Absolutely adorable :)

Beautiful story

Yes carry on please!