OMG ur last line... a lot emotional..
I love this story it was though confusing in mid but ended better

definitely is a different style to write with, but I kind of like it. stream of conscious kind of a thing. so very good

Around the middle, the pacing kinda took off, but it was alright. The dilemma was really good, I didn’t expect it to be that way.

The best parts of this story are from the major dilemma up until the ending. Of course the falling in love bit is also a great part.

The excess of ellipses really did bother me at the beginning, but you end up getting used to them. I’m not sure if they got fewer as the chapters went by or my brain just blocked them out.

Thank you for this story! I really liked how it turned out. If you’re a reading thinking about giving this a read, please do!

I'm reading the reviews about how amazing this story is, but I couldn't get through the first chapter solely because of the overuse of the ellipses (...) This is not a valid form of punctuation and I suggest you take on a beta to review the language. I'm so tempted to read it but the '...' is killing me. Sorry for the criticism, I'm sure this is a wonderful story!

Amazing story!

There are no words. Wow. I'm in tears it was so good. This may have been one of the best dramione I have ever read. Probably the only one to get me this emotional for an ending. The story was amazing and you did such an amazing job on it. Thank you so much for sharing.

So good! I love it so much.

Absolutely beautiful.

Wow. Just,wow. Thank you.

This story is pure:
Magnificent
Amazing
Gorgeous
Incredible
Creative

Congratulations!

Wow. This story is FANTASTIC! Original plotline, Draco and Hermione IN character. Superb! One of the best I have ever read of ny favorite couple. Congratulations! I will be reading your next story.

What a great story! It was written in a unique format and very interesting overall! Highly recommend

Content and story were A, but I almost didn't read it due to the bad grammar. It isnt even the grammar as a whole, it's the ellipsis! "..." Is not a proper way to express pauses. You 1000% need a beta and, shit, I'm offering to clean this up for you. Send me a PM if you're interested. I really liked your story and the emotions and literally everything else. But damn the ... was killing me.

Wow... this is the best Dramione I have read in a very very long time! What an original concept.. love it! Thank you so much for writing such an awesome story.

Thank you for this, it was a wonderfully imagined adventure in time travel, equal parts heart-wrenching and satisfying. I also think you great job at pacing this story in a relatively small amount of chapters. You managed to fit a lot of character development and timeline/context switching into less than 20 chapters without making it seem rushed or incomplete. Just lovely all around, great job!