this was awesome

This story was good found it funny when they realised that Gohan and Beerus are stronger than god

You have a great idea to one of the least attempted fics. unfortunately, your writing is far too corny. Love? seriously? I haven't seen a more out of character (in a negative way as there are OC Gohan's everywhere) Gohan like this before. Declarations of love, dangling participles, double negatives and the far too stereotyped "girl meets boy and girl unconvincingly overly attracted and has feelings for boy" story.

I don't know your perception of love and emotions, but I won't say it can't happen in one day as there are many cases, but when it comes to a story, you must at least try to elaborate the scene and why a powerful emotion came into play between Rias and Gohan when they were ten. you just threw something and asks the readers to buy it without looking at it.

that last few paragraphs... are the lamest excuses iv read in a long time :/ if they were afraid of king piccolo, then gohan should have been able to smite them with 1% of his power :/ but his body goes... crack...? WTF actually?

i sense an incredibly strong pervert, i admit i laughed a bit :d

Buena serie espero actualizacipn pronto

So this is another story turning Rias Gremory into a user bitch. Disappointing. The only flawed leading character in the original work was the MC not the leading girl. So many antagonists in the DxD universe, even before introducing new bads to attempt harm. Why take a good girl with horrible circumstances created by her useless family members and make her something she's not? Next you'll do like other trash I've seen and support Rizer Phoenix as a guy's guy.

Later have Vegeta be kicked in the dick and pull bitch I'm adorable

Fun fact apparently Issei becomes obsessed with breasts after a old man talked to him about them when he was young so you might as well make it roshi

Naruto it's not in this chapter so please look before you write.

woah chill man lemon at the start of a chapter chiiiilllll

POWER LEVELS ARE BULLSHIT!

TFS Piccolo? Awesome!

As much as I support the Big Man Upstairs in Heaven, this does sound like something Beerus would do and won't fault him.

You have some strange obsession over Naruto.
Good chapter.
Try to find the "Naruto" word after writing though.