This is great! Love your worldbuilding and research!

great story, i love how you potray Zeph and nuffink personality, u even got all the details sorted out to the middle name!.

im looking forward for a new addition to the haddock house.. at first i thought valka was sick, but u hit very hard with astrid situation. i hope both she and her daughter(i assume ) are fine, for the family sake..

keep up the excellent work!. looking forward for the next chapter

Oh man, this is amazing! You write so beautifully, what a talent you have! I really hope you plan to continue with this, please do!

Since when or why would eret be gay, especially with tuffnut? Idk that didn’t add up. This story had a good beginning but it seems weird to suddenly just make half the characters gay

Holy shit. That’s goddamn beautiful. Loved how you turned Snotlout into this rouged but sweet wise man. This was that good, keep it up

The names seem confusing as shit but surprisingly good and completely original. Keep it up

I finished chapter 9. This is perhaps the best story yet. I honestly think you should contact either Netflix or DreamWorks and submit the entire story when its finished. I think it would a huge hit. Just myopinion. But I'm anxious to read more

So far I've only theu chapter 9. A d I absolutely love this. I'm not going to loe, this should be made into a fourth and final movie. I was just talking to one of my friends about this. Of I were you I would seriously consider sending this in and seeing if a 4th movie is possible

JUST GOT HOOKED ON HOW TO TRAIN YOUR DRAGON!

AND I LOVE THIS POST-SERIES STORY YOU MADE!

"And it might not be sons, she added to herself, before shaking her head to clear her thoughts" - Sooooo uuuummmm yeaaaaaah SO HAPPY ABOUT THIS PART!

OMG I’ve read this story so many times whilst waiting for you to update! It’s soooooo amazing, one of my favourite fanfics. I wish it was cannon, it’s so good! Please update soon! I can understand if your busy or have other things going on but I would love another chapter, I have to know what happens! Keep up the amazing work! ;) :)

Gah this can’t be the end yet. I hope there is more coming because I’m already hooked. If you need a Beta I’ve been one for 4 other writers on FFN.

I don’t usually review chapters in the middle of catching up but this was beautiful. Just had to let you know that.

Please tell me you're still writing this! it's the best story I've read

With love comes loss...
With disaster, comes three blasts of a thunder ear... Well, you’ve made it clear that the journey would not be without trials. A surprise is always welcome, in that I imagine we are all thinking along similar lines as to the meaning of the horn blasts but a surprise however presented is always welcome.
Just thinking about story direction layouts etc, Old Berk... turns out it was completely burnt to the ground by the Warlords (deleted scenes detailed as such) nonetheless, many years have past, what’s to say green pasture and overgrowth hasn’t returned.
Good luck with your exams, I have my own to look forward to at the end of the month... go publishing studies.D

please make a flashback about Nuffink's birth! I need Hiccup and Astrid "talk" about the possibility of her dying.