Reviews for Deviluke's Greatest Hero
LightJakRises chapter 3 . 5/31
Initially i thought Deku having electromagnetism was a plot hole but i think it works.

I think Yui would be more interesting paired up with Bakugo but you could still have her be childhood friends with Deku. You could play with that ambiguity as Bakugo could be jealous of Yui's closeness with Deku.

I like the pairing of All Might and Mikado. Its a good foil for Lala/Deku.

It might be interesting to have Rito and Mikan as side characters. It could be a shoutout to the Vigilante spinoff.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 3/4
This story will function very well because Izuku is a excellent protagonist much better than Rito in my opinion.

The Devildukean race is one of the most powerful in the galaxy, and feared by everyone since her Father can beat both the villains, and Heroes of this world combined with his impressive army.
WeberCode chapter 3 . 12/22/2019
Next Chapter!
zac Garcia chapter 1 . 10/2/2019
i can’t wait!
Raltol Lotlar chapter 3 . 9/23/2019
I dont have nothing against a story with many MC everywhere, but you should at least write more chapters about the MC before having 3 different plots going at the same time. Its only 3 chapters and we have screentime of 3 characters with 3 more making appearance.
Besides that, great story so far.
Raltol Lotlar chapter 1 . 9/23/2019
Please, add Mei. I dont care if you add her for romance, friendship or partnership. But 1 cute pink haired girl that creates CRAZY stuff is not enough when you can add another cute pink haired CRAZY girl that ALSO creates stuff. Hahaha

Anyway, interesting story. Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2019
this story dead
thetyrant67 chapter 1 . 7/9/2019
Fuck, this is godly awesome. Please continue!
ARSLOTHES chapter 3 . 6/17/2019
Interesting fic
KongKing94 chapter 3 . 5/24/2019
Izuku’s life just got a whole lot better for him and his girlfriends and more amusing for me.

Now seeing as you are such a My Hero Academia Fan can I make a suggestion for a story? It is a Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super and My Hero Academia crossover. If you cannot do it can you at least post it as it is?

Super Heroes and Super Sayians part 1: The Beginning of the story, The structure of the Story, and World of The Story and the Gods.

The Dragon Ball Universe is merged together with the world of My Hero Academia with Son Goku going down events of both the original Dragon Ball series but also the events of My Hero Academia. But their are multiple twists to the original Dragon Ball story.

1; As people with Quirks are prevalent their is no need for Hercule Satan and all our protagonists are given proper credit for their adventures and heroism.

2; When you go into the later parts of Dragon Ball and Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super take a look at these MasakoX videos and implement them. What if Bardock Convinced the Sayians? What if Kid Goku went Super Sayian? What If Raditz turned Good? And finally What if Nappa turned Good?

3; All the Gods of Earth’s mythology are real and not just myths. This must happen when you go into Dragon Ball Super as that part of the Dragon Ball series is all about gods and divinity. So when the Gods get involved make them have all the abilities of all their pop culture counterparts and their various incarnations and the characters that they inspired in pop culture and be as powerful from the viewpoint of the ancient cultures that worshipped them and can do anything that can be imagined with their spheres of influence but their weaknesses are the ones found in their original religions and mythologies. For example a creator deity of the universe in a mythology has the power of the Big Bang and so does the godhead of a pantheon. But for an example of Earth’s deities having weaknesses Thor Odinson of the Aesir is weak against Norse Magic and the venom of the Midgard Serpent and weapons of the Norse Jotuns.

How the influence of the Gods of Mythology applies to Kami and The Position of Guardian of Earth is this. The Guardian of Earth is thought to be the Monotheistic and Abrahamic God but is nowhere as powerful as people think of God but the position of Guardian of Earth is one that the Gods of Earth used to act as a messenger and protector of the earth as well as their emissary to the Kai’s and Xeno as he is empowered to act as such but the Guardian is still mortal hence why their are multiple Guardians but they still have God Ki. The reason why many of the Gods of Earth are no longer around or active is because that after the Age of Myths and Legends they had developed a non interference policy on the mortal world at least for those that are still around; and many of them have also ascended to a higher plane of existence beyond anything than what we have seen in the Dragon Ball series by mastering and perfecting both magic and Ki farther than anything else in the Dragon Ball franchise and some pantheons have moved on and gone into uncharted waters and created universes that are what people thought about the universe during the times that they were worshiped and the societies in those worlds are idealized versions of the cultures that worshipped them or some divine pantheons just left to do their own thing and that fits the theme of the Dragon Ball series that they’re is always someone better. Also it would possibly make some religious people like Hindu’s and Buddhists think that Son Goku is the Avatar of Hanuman the Hindu Ape God or is the reincarnation of Sun Wukong from Journey to The West(who was the inspiration for Son Goku and Journey to The West was the inspiration for the beginning of Dragon Ball)until the truth of Son Goku’s heritage comes out amongst him and his friends.

4; Because of Bardock convincing the Sayians their are enough survivors for the Universe Seven Sayians to not being on the edge of extinction or need to breed with other species and working to get revenge on Freeza and free the planets under his iron fist, and thanks to Goku and Nappa eventually the whole race of Sayians ends up eventually reaching the non God Super Sayian States.

5; All the characters are teenagers when you go into Dragon Ball Z and their early to mid twenties when you go into Dragon Ball Super.

6; Take the Dragon Ball and My Hero Academia as one story with Dragon Ball Z, And Dragon Ball Super as sequels while still being a crossover with My Hero Academia.

Super Heroes and Super Sayians Part 2: Bardock the Father of Goku and The Sayians Prophet.

Now here is the idea for Bardock. The Father of Goku is a mixture of all his various incarnations over the years just to make him a bit more interesting when you go into Dragon Ball Z. Bardock had a loving relationship with Gine at least for Sayians but was really harsh when on the job, like in the original special and learned to loosen up because of Gine like in Dragon Ball Minus comic and Dragon Ball Super Broly movie and is beloved by the low class Sayians and eventually gains his clairvoyant powers from the original Bardock: The Father of Goku TV Special that he debuted in but after being able to save quite a lot of his people but not his wife, Gine’s loss hit him hard and afterwards he got harsh again like how he was before he met Gine and in his grief had thrown himself into training his people, and building a new society for the Saiyans by abolishing the class system and Bardock working his ass off to find other survivors of The Saiyan race who exist across the cosmos and bring them home for their own protection and to find some who are willing to fight against Freeza and his forces to free the planets under his iron fists and training himself to the point that he has unlocked and mastered most of the powers of the non God Super Sayian Transformations. The transformations Bardock knows are Super Sayian, Super Saiyan 2, and Super Sayian 3. But he only gets to that level of power after 20 years of training and battles on the frontline and because of this Bardock is the first Super Saiyan that most of the Gods of Universe 7 know about that is active until Son Goku does it to. The reason why Bardock doesn’t make Freeza into space dust is that Bardock cannot sense power levels and he also does not know how strong Freeza is and has to oversee the survival and development of Saiyan survivors and their new society and make sure that they are not wiped as not every Sayian in this rebuilt society is a Super Sayian and the only ones who are Super Sayians at this point in time are in the single digits and none of them are as strong as Bardock so sending them is a last resort despite him spending a lot of time training his people to unlock the Legendary Super Saiyan potential in his race. Also Bardock despite his great power is chained down by his responsibilities as he is seen as a founding pillar of this new Saiyan society and a father figure to its younger generations ironically enough.

This would make for great character parellels between Goku and his father Bardock and also it would allow them both to bond and for Goku to connect with his people, his father and his family and also accept his heritage a lot easier than he did in cannon Dragon Ball Z. Also it would give Goku and Bardock some father and son bonding time Saiyan Style with Bardock training Goku to master most of the mortal Super Saiyan Transformations that he knows about and Bardock ends opening up again and bonding with both of his sons again and this training and bonding ends up getting him to show his good side and opens up again and eventually lives long enough to be a grandpa and a great grandpa when Gohan is born and eventually becomes a parent and has Pan like at the end of Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super.

Super Heroes and Super Sayians Part 3: The powers of Son Goku.

For Son Goku’s abilities go all the way. However to differentiate this incarnation of Goku from cannon Goku not only gets some serious martial arts skills but gets an actual education with the My Hero Academia class and graduates from high school albeit with great difficulty and with a lot of help from his friends. Goku gets all his cannon powers but after gaining his tail back he ends up training to master the Oozaru form through intense meditation as his form of atonement after learning that he in his Oozaru form was the one that crushed Granpa Gohan and gains all the power boosts and techniques and abilities from Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z, Dragon Ball GT, Dragon Ball Super, and reach Super Sayian and perfect it. In the Cell Saga Goku gains Super Sayian 2 and defeats Cell and lives to tell the tale. When you go into the Buu Saga Goku gains Super Sayian 3 and learns about Super Sayian 4 during the Buu Saga from Old Kai and works to gain it and ends up mastering the Golden Oozaru, and reaches Super Sayian Four and then goes several steps beyond by going into Super Full Power Saiyan 4, and all the other forms and techniques that Goku has in Dragon Ball GT and reaches the same level of power he had at the end of Dragon Ball GT at his maximum potential during the Buu Saga to destroy Kid Buu and save the world thanks to Old Kai before going down the events of Dragon Ball Super. When you go into Dragon Ball Super Son Goku gains and absorbs the God Ki and keeps it obtains the Super Sayian God Form and Super Sayian Blue, and all the various forms in Dragon Ball Super from all the movies, the manga, and the anime tvshow and Perfected Super Sayian Blue and can use Hakai like in the Dragon Ball Super Manga and finally a fully mastered Ultra Instinct without many of his drawbacks as he is no longer vulnerable when his tail is grabbed as he had trained to overcome that weaknesses like Nappa and Vegeta did in Dragon Ball Cannon and Goku now knows the danger of looking at the full moon until he controls and ultimately masters the Oozaru within himself.

That would be amazing because Son Goku would have come full circle on his development as a character and his abilities. Son Goku would be the apex of what the Sayian race could have been and possibly it could become and Son Goku would both be in tune with his primal roots and yet has also ended up transcending them by reaching godhood. This has to happen and when word gets out on how strong Son Goku is it drives Universe 7 and several other Universes insane with how much power he has and it would make Bardock one proud dad and be the pride of the Universe 7 Sayians.

Super Heroes and Super Sayians Part 4: Vegeta. Prince Vegeta has to go down a similar story arc that he has in cannon but with a twist. Now that the class system of the old Saiyan race is done for and his royal blood means squat now in the new Sayian society Vegeta has to wonder what is his place in the universe and who he is now that the Saiyans as a race and his species was rebuilt into something better and it was accomplished by a low class Saiyan warrior and one who had also abolished the class system with all Saiyans standing as equals in the new society that Bardock has built for the pure blood Saiyans and Sayian hybrids makes Vegeta have an identity crisis on who he is and his role in the universe. Also to further rub salt in the wound that Vegeta is not special as Nappa and even Raditz eventually become Super Sayians and Raditz becomes a Super Sayian God like Goku as both them and Goku another low class have ended up surpassing him The Prince of All Sayians and the elites of Old Planet Vegeta multiple times over. Vegeta could maybe bear with Nappa becoming a Super Sayian but Goku and Raditz? Raditz who was originally a low class soldier and Son Goku who was born with a power level of 2? That would drive Vegeta nuts! And when Vegeta truly realizes how powerful Son Goku has become it drives him crazy with jealousy and makes him a little unhinged. All these events makes Vegeta have a existential crisis and a bug up his ass about his own place in the universe and really intensify his rivalry with Son Goku, and Raditz and it would add more depth to the characters.

Super Heroes and Super Saiyans Part 5: The Heroes of My Hero Academia and their abilities. Now for the My Hero Academia cast of Izuku’s generation they not only have all the quirks and powers that they have in cannon but they also get a boost by mastering Ki energy along with their Quirks and end up finding ways to make their own style and unique abilities with both just to stand out from the crowd and they also evolve in power to reach Son Goku’s level or at least so they can keep up at least with Son Goku and could possibly be the inspiration for the growth of the human race and also new generations of Super Heroes.

Super Heroes and Super Sayians Part 6: Character arcs and parings. Izuku hooks up with Ochaco and Goku in the Dragon Ball and My Hero Academia section of the story either gets with Chi Chi or Momo Yaoyorozu or Son Goku can possibly get with both women in a One True Threesome. If you go with the three some angle for Goku’s love life this is the only case of the adaptational sexuality trope for the girls.

You can pair which characters with which provided it fits with the original characters personalities and aside from having Ki along with their cannon abilities they are as cannon like as possible. So no gender bending or changing characters sexualities aside from the possible three way romance for Son Goku or their personalities! The same principle applies to most of the Villians and other Heroes. However their is one major exception. All the Sayians from the Sayian Saga in Dragon Ball Z survive and they all end up changing for the better.

Raditz ends up having kids with Launch and also being an actual brother to Goku while working to reach his brother’s level and succeeding at that and Nappa being a bodyguard and chauffeur to the Son Family as well as working as a gardener and florist while also gaining the Berserk Super Sayian Form before eventually retiring from the Z Fighters lifestyle but not before training the rest of the Sayians on New Planet Vegeta how to reach Super Sayian and eventually the remaining non Super Sayian God transformations. It would be awesome and Freiza’s worst fear.
Horizon13 chapter 3 . 5/23/2019
Interesting story
Guest chapter 3 . 5/21/2019
chapter 4
Mark the Mark chapter 3 . 5/15/2019
i really want to see .of the girls added. i know you were leaning towards no harem but like one of your other reviewers said, what made to love ru great was the interactions between the girls.

yami is also best girl.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2019
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general ironox chapter 3 . 5/6/2019
Nice story! I hope you choice the harem part. Since I see it more fun in that way.

Look forward to the next chapter
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