YAS
Finally I can see my cute evil flower
I think your story is awesome, you were just a little insecure about the first part but I'm sure it'll be GREAT

Speaking of why not go visit ralsei real quick before you go?

this is really good so far

I can just imagine Kris later on just trying to maul sans for 'befriending' toriel with Susie having to arm lock him XD

I enjoyed this even if you aren't continuing it.

This is amazing! I am already hooked and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Nice. The only thing I noticed is for a bit it was " kris sees" instead of "you see". good tho! :D

... don't stress yourself too much! this chapter is great! ... to be honest all of this story is. have a nice day and I hope school will not bore you too much chip!

...okay I am officially hooked.

I'm enjoying this so far! Please do more!