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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Please update

Crew name: The Dreaming Demon Pirates or just The Devil/Demon Pirates( make all of them get a devil fruit at some point and it sounds like you're going to include all the tails so double fitting) if you go this way though just make sure one of the powers prevents them from dying to sinking or drowning likep aokijis ice devil fruit. Maybe something like the land land fruit or the rock rock fruit/ the platform platform fruit/float float fruit/wood wood fruit.

you can go with the royal idea because it is fitting but it also wouldnt make sense because they'd have to have a lot of respect to really earn that name and the marines wouldnt give it to them so if you do use it you'd have to have the name come from someone else, maybe cocoyashi village or loguetown.

for the jolly roger I think you should do a crown because what bigger dream is there than the pirate king, also give it naruto's red eyes and Lufias scar under her eye because that's her determination, then give it a devil smile. you can do fox tails too instead of bones but that would kind of twist it toward Naruto and I think you should keep it mostly neutral.

different ship: If you add Ritchie to the crew make it a lion's head, if you dont go for an Oni-themed ship or maybe a fox wearing a strawhat and name it The Lions Leap(courage leap of faith)/The Devil's Den/The Going Merry respectively

sorry bout the lack of capitalization and what not I'm feeling particularly lazy and I'm on my phone.

Please update soon

Update bitch!

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and what narutos plan is but damn it is horrible that naruto and Yugtio when straight to impel down just for being a possible threat and now they will be a actual threat and will naruto have a pairing

Will naruto have any weapons like a tonfa or a naginata?

Also surprised the only GB so far is Luffy, wouldn't doing the same with Zorro and Sanji make the fic funnier?

I say just make Merry bigger and better armed/stuff otherwise true fans won't like the fic.

Now when you say crossover picks is it just limited to OP and Naruto or all of the fandom universe as long as they fit the theme of a pirate crew and not too OP?

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Well if it's not, oh wait never mind, I was going to offer a couple suggestions. First get rid of the Black Cat pirates either kill them and sink their bodies then remodel their ship. Or second take Nezumi's ship and remodel it, the second idea wont work since Cocoyasi is after Usopp's home island. What do you think about the idea with the Black Cat Pirates I mean let's be reasonable the only person who really made a comeback was Django and he somehow joined Hina's Crew along side demoted Lieutenant Fullbody.

Well I only know of two females with the form of a black cat. Yoruichi Shihoin who's used quite often in Naruto based multi-crossovers, and Kuroka who's only ever used in the DXD base of Crossovers.

I like the fanfic and you have it set up very nicely I can see a solid story if you keep with it. You keep Naruto in enough to make it a decent crossover and you changed the story with dialogue and perception shifts which is nice and refreshing. Hope you feel like sticking with this one I would enjoy reading every chapter. If I remember my account info I’ll fav and follow

I have to say, your story intrigued me quite a bit with the female luffy part. You would think that more people would try fanfics with her, but you rarely seen any at all.

Either way, good to see you didn't go too overpowered with Naruto. I enjoy a powerful main character, one who can struggle but still comes out on top. Not many can find the balance, but you seem to be doing well.

The one thing I wanted to know was pairings though. I know you mentioned them in an early chapter, but nothing has been said since. I made the assumption, given his actions with Lufia, that she will be it (or one of, if the harem route is what you are going for). I am actually rooting for a Naru/Lufia pairing, or Naru/Lufia/Harem myself... as I find your female luffy adorable.

Either way, keep up the good work! I look forward to more updates!