why haven't you updated this great story I'm dying to know what happens next so please continue this good story

I love this story so much! BJ feels like a real human being and I feel his emotions throughout the story. Keep up the fantastic work!

I can't even fathom the amount of stick he must get from other other marines with the nickname "bj"

One big family drama here.
It took a toll on BJ.
Hope that the next chapter comes soon.

The attraction is hardly to miss in this.
The Tyrant was indeed a very scary part of the game.
Also very brutal how he killed the Licker

A tough fight with the Tyrant.
Poor Marvin.

Like the teaser,
Makes me want to read that story.

Interesting to see how the writing change when you go to Irons POV. Good writing!

Im surprised G didn't infect BJ when he was right there.

Another good chapter.
Love the brother and sister moments
BJ having a metal leg,
Wonder if he will be infected with the G-virus and having it regrow?

Nice action here!
And both warm and confusing reunion for BJ.
Next the fight against his own father

A cliffhanger with a Licker!
You described the Licker very well.
I also enjoy the thoughts of the characters

A good journey so far.
Guess that courtyard survivor is Leon.

And they are on the quest.
You did good with the details.
And I can sense the attraction between them.

They made it to the station, where it is everything but safe.
Like the pairing so far.
I noticed the Wolfenstein reference!

First episode and I enjoyed reading.
I like your way of writing, makes reading a bit easier.

Your OC, BJ Birkin, is interesting.
Makes me curious how the story will go.
I know it will be a nightmare.