Whoa, I'm impressed. You know, I really don't like re-writes. I mean, how much talent does it take to re-write a story already told in a video game? Not very much. But this is different. You've changed it around, thrown in twists, and put so much characterizations in. I mean, your Caleb character certainly isn't the normal Link-type. And your chapters are so long! It's obvious you've really thought this out. I like it. _

Oh, and thanks for defending me in the reviews on "wind waker" by kribmasterx. I appreciate it.

Wow... Poor Caleb! Excellent chapter!

KK: AH, THIS IS THE BEST TAKE ON WW EVER WRITTEN! Nice, lenghty chapters! I love you for it, love you, love you, love you! Could I make you my personal fanfiction slave and force you to cater to my every fanfic whim?

Sizzle: Uh, I don't think so KK...

KK: Ah, shucks, atleast write the next chapter! I'm loving this fanfic, loving, loving, loving it! I like to say things thrice, woo hoo, hoo, hoo. But seriously, keep writing. Looking forward to the next chapter, you see. Absolutely must continue! I'm actually giving alot of feedback, wow, I never do that for most fanfics...but people these days don't know how much it sucks getting reviews one sentence long. You lazy reviewers, get off your lazy buns and give the author some crops, will ya? I mean, they slaved over a hot keyboard to bring us these long chapters. I know that feeling, comrade, of writing a bit and getting nothing but quick reviews from people who aren't willing to take a couple minutes of their life to spare you a review.

Sizzle: OO;; KK, stop being so...dramatic...

KK: I've got every reason to be dramatic! Lazy reviewers, give the author the crops they deserve or bust! ROAR, BEWARE!

I like your take on the Wind Waker. I thought it was going to be a story parallel to that of the game, but it turns out to be an altered version. And I like it. Please continue.

this is really good, get the next chapter up soon

Who the hell is this idiot? I know what a bleeping Gyrog is, mister! I played the game AND I beat it! There's no punches you can pull past me! Don't let my gentle reviewer's name fool you; I'm not someone you want to annoy! And, this is very annoying! Not to mention, compassionless! I sure as hell hope you read this little flame, because I'm on a high horse and no one's gonna tell me to get off!

I still see your story ;)

I don't think have got rid of it :)

Hey, I like how this is turning out. You reviewed my story that I started, seems were doing the same kinda thing.. Good luck!

hey yeah, just one question. how old are caleb and tetra? is tetra older than caleb, i mean, she did call him a kid. anyway, i like this twist. can't wait to know more about caleb

that was pretty good. keep goin man

It's a really good start to the story, and I'm interested to know what happens next.

Interesting. I'd like to hear more. BTW, are you reffering to Windmill Island as an entirely different location than that Windfall Island?

This was very well-written and I enjoyed reading it. Nice pace in setting things up. Good job!

Btw, you need to change your settings to accept anonymous reviews and you'll get a lot more of them!

This is different but really good, write more soon.