Reviews for The Anti-Rose
Warmachine375 chapter 5 . 3/28
Interesting, most interesting. I see that Asta was chosen by Charlotte Roselei, the Magic Knight Captain of the Blue Rose to be part of her squad instead of Yami Sukehiro and the Black Bulls after passing the Magic Knights Entrance Exam in this story. And I am already liking it already of this from the beginning. :)

It's not odd for Asta to be part of Roselei's all-women Magic Knight squad because there were few male members in Blue Rose except they serve as errand boys according to Sol Marron. Heck, Sol even stated that if Yuno was not chosen by William Vangeance to be a part of Golden Dawn, he would have been a good errand boy to her in Blue Rose.

Although knowing Yuno, he will just work and persevere hard like Asta would do even in a squad of female Magic Knights and win over Blue Rose in time just he like did with Golden Dawn who don't like him at first due to his commoner background (which is ironic since Yuno is actually a prince of Spade Kingdom from a previous regime overthrown by the Dark Triad) in the canon if he were recruited by Charlotte Roselei.

In addition, Asta stands out way too much in Blue Rose with his Anti-Magic and hotblooded determination along with his hammy screams, lol. He would be like an annoying but lovable and determinable little brother to Blue Rose.

Hopefully thanks to Asta and his magnetic personality, hard work, ideals and actions, that might change in the long run and allow the male Blue Rose members be given a chance to fight and prove their mettle as Magic Knights, and I bet that the female Blue Rose members had relationships with those said men within Roselei's Magic Knights squad.

Plus if the omake from Chapter 1 about Sol Marron who caught Asta and Roselei roleplaying One Piece (as Luffy and Tashigi I believe) in their mock fight redhanded and laughed her ass off while they chase her to not tell everyone which they already knew and smiled is to be believed, Blue Rose would be relieved and happy of their captain loosening up and no longer a pole stuck up inside her ass, and life in the all-female Magic Knight squad was so much better thanks to Asta being himself, lol.

It would be great for Sol Marron's Character Development happening earlier than canon thanks to Asta in Blue Rose.

Not to mention, despite their creed towards men apparently, many of the female Blue Rose members secretly support the idea of having romantic relationships with men as Charlotte Roselei and Sol Marron were shocked to see them openly support their Magic Knight Captain's love for Yami and wanted her to confess to him, at least until Yami crashed in the party, lol.

Since Asta is in Blue Rose, it would be pivotal with his Anti-Magic for Charlotte Roselei, Puli Angel and Risacca Ondell to be freed from Elf possession on them during the Mass Elf Reincarnation on Magic Knights by Patolli across the Clover Kingdom capital and it might be possible and awesome for Roselei to take a page from Yami's book and break her limits of her Briar Magic like her blue roses turn red which produces a scent that inhibits enemy senses like Charla did in her body when working together with Yami to defeat Zagred the Word Soul Devil.

And that, perhaps Asta can help Roselei man up and confess her feelings to Yami with the similar method he tries with Sister Lily Aquaria before albeit he gets rejected with a Holy Fist of Love from her Water Magic, lol. It would be very funny that it actually worked and Roselei gets to have relationship with Yami much to the glee of Blue Rose and thanks to Asta. XD

Anyways, it is a good Black Clover AU story and I look forward for the next chapter. Faved and Followed. :D
YuYu chapter 1 . 8/20/2019
I love Sol the most! Best girl for sure!
Awareness Bringer chapter 4 . 8/6/2019
You’ve been pretty busy lately, huh? Hope you do come back to this story, though.
Skinny Weni chapter 1 . 5/30/2019
Lmao this is actually pretty good I was honestly expecting to cringe a bit but this is interesting
Persona of the People chapter 5 . 5/24/2019
Well I can't claim to know your update schedule, but please make more. You are literally the only person doing anything for this pairing...
Aqua Rules chapter 5 . 5/10/2019
Hahahaha I love this so much! I never pictured having Asta on The Blue Rose squad. It is even funnier than I expected. Keep it up! xD :)
Guest chapter 3 . 4/14/2019
I sure hope it's a harem between Asta, Sol, Charlotte, and Lezli despite what that other person said but if you want to keep that thing between here and Magna going I don't mind that either I haven't seen that many Black Clover Asta z harem stories yet.
Awareness Bringer chapter 5 . 4/16/2019
Looks good. I think I see some missed out words and all that, but I’m glad you’re updating again, referenced Fanzell, and are considering the harem. I would’ve reviewed the notes chapter, but I figured you were going to get rid of it once this was posted, so save a review for the real work and all that, you know. I’ve also been dabbling in Black Clover writing myself just so you know.

Looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
Valenmvic chapter 4 . 4/15/2019
Keep studying hard. If you decide to go to college in the future, all the studying and hard work you do know will be helpful. Trust me, I'm in college right now, and I wish I did better in HS.
Notemix doragon chapter 4 . 4/9/2019
No te preocupes yo igual estoy en las mismas con los trabajos o tareas que me dan en el liceo
Guest chapter 4 . 3/30/2019
U know when i saw the title i thought it was a harem
Random-Cliche-Name chapter 4 . 3/29/2019
Ha DAY's and PSAT's are a bitch. Don't worry about dude
darkchannel30 chapter 4 . 3/29/2019
It's funny when I first read the title "28 days late" I thought it had something to do with Charlotte being 'late'

Well any way love your work good luck and I'll be patient
jairoesme chapter 4 . 3/29/2019
Alright my patience has always rewarded me before
jairoesme chapter 4 . 3/29/2019
Alright my patience has all ways rewarded me before
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