I'm loving this soooo much. X3

I love this.

I really love this so much.

I love Rocinante and Doflamingo. I love their story and the one Law is going to carry for the rest of his journey. And I can’t help but stand by Dulcinea, because I want her to be there for her brothers — who keep on suffering.

Dulcinea’s observational Haki is lovely to read — perhaps another name should be given. Soul Haki ? Musical Haki ? I like what that one suggests, that her voice is her greatest strength and that she’s able to hear the music beneath every persons’ heart.

Also on another note, I like that she’s siding with Doffy — even though I really really prefer Roci for the sweetheart that he is, ultimately his brother DID come back with clear intentions to betray him, to spy him. Roci didn’t give two shit about Doffy and only now from Dulcinea’s perceptive does that notion really sink. I’ll be mad if she didn’t love both her brothers, despite some bias, she wants her family and I’m curious to see as to how the events will change. (Also how Law will fit, bc ofc some Roci/Law dynamic might spur something from Dulcinea seeing how she desperately wants her brother’s love and he decides instead Law is more worthy of his words than her)

Hope it’s not abandoned but honestly,

I am willing to wait.

Good work.

Please please PLEASSSEEE write more of this if you’re up to it! It’s such an interesting idea and I love how you’re portraying Dulcinea and her complicated relationships with Doflaminfo and Rocinate and you have really strong writing skills! There’s so much potential drama and exhilarating character dynamics and I would adore getting to see what you come up with! I’m so hooked only 3 chapters in and I can only hope you come back to this!

OMG! Please update this one soon! I'm really interested in where you're going to take this story!

Amazing! This is why I love one piece fanfics, just exploring the different dynamics each group of characters have that we don’t get to see in the show. Especially with the added element of Dulcinea. I read a story where Rocinante had a similar goal and loved it, can’t wait to see how this plays out. Certainly she has a tough balancing act ahead of her.

damn this is so good, but I feel like Doffy's going to force Dulcinea to eat the ope ope no mi and give him eternal life since she won't betray him.

J'ai dévoré c'est trois chapitre à une vitesse, j'ai vraiment hâte de connaître la suite c'est déjà bien captivant
Bonne continuation

Wow c'est intéressant comme début, je suis intrigué par la suite

Yeah, I wanted to write something similar to this too. Doffy wasn’t born evil. He was helped along that path by the decisions of others and the circumstances he found himself in. In the early days, and potentially even in the later days, Doffy is redeemable. He is NOT the face of evil. He has done and condoned some terrible things, yes, but there are significantly worse people out there. Seriously. So a story where Doffy gets a redemption arc is an interesting idea to me. You took it one step further in a way to reunite the bonds of family in the donquixote siblings. I look forward to seeing where you take this.

I love your concepts and writing and the way you weave such a comprehensive story, and just everything about this! I really really hope to see an update soon, thank you so much!

omfg this is good pls continue

Great chapter I loved it so much omfg

interesting

This is really sad...my heart squized on the last part...

I hope all of them can be saved...and Doffy to not go psycho...maybe he thinks of Dulcinea and step the brake. And Rocinante...if he still betrayed them in the end...at least i hope he will survive...Dulcinea will feel slighyly better if he is alive somewhere.

I want more family fluff! It's cute!

Wonder when Marco will appear...and is it a Marnea ship?

I'm really looking forward for your next update! Please update! Hope it be soon...

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz