Hey, cute story! Can’t say much, because I don’t watch RWBY. But nice work anyways.
Mercury is a strange name I think. Anyways, seems like he didn’t have the best life. Poor baby, and he’s the type to play his pain off all cool like. Well, this was nice to read. The walk outside and Cinder offering condolences in her own, discrete, punkish little way. Excellent work! :)