Great ending...this whole 2-part story was so angst-ridden, that I almost lost it a couple of times! If you hadn't allowed them to conceive Jack, I probably would have stopped reading. But it was a good story, of growth, redemption and forgiveness. Thank you for re-posting these. I hadn't read them before!

Why aren't they talking about adoption at all? This is so terrlble for their relationship, and for them!

I love that they found a home full of happiness.

Kate is a slut and should have just ended it, not cheat. I wish no happiness for Alice and Jasper. They are jerks and don't even let me start on Esme and Emmett. Edward is too good for his so called family.

I want to kill Alice. She is so horrible. She must really hate Edward.

I know this is hard on Edward, but Bella does need to heal herself. Jacob was the normal jerk that he normally is. I bet he never told Bella what he actually said to Edward. It really was an easy mistake to make and Bella put that thought into Edward's head.

Bella should have been in therapy for the last few years. She has never dealt with her history. This was not on Edward. This was all her craziness. Edward was handling the situation just fine. He was working through what needed to change to become a family. Bella has not proper coping skills. She likes to hurt Edward when she can't cope.

This is a wonderful story - thank you for sharing it.

Absolutely loved the story! Thank you so much for posting it. Not sure why it would have been reported, I didn't see anything wrong with it. I thought it was brilliant.

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I absolutely inhaled this story! thanks for sharing!

I love your writing!

I'm so glad you changed it.

I really thought bella should have given him a bit of a lemon with the "other stuff" since he was going to have to face alice & jazz. Hahaha

This was really great!

I'm so glad they are getting the payment reversed!