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Garnet168 chapter 21 . 7/25/2019 This was a great story if it were a show I’d watch it. |
nehalenia chapter 21 . 4/9/2019 Man, you write way faster than I can read and review! Sorry this is late, but I've enjoyed every bit of this. You've actually made Law's main crew come alive for me to the point that I now care about them in the manga. It's going to be hard to remember this isn't canon. I was rewatching some of the Dressrosa episodes and am now convinced that at some point on the way to Wano, one of those alternate dimension flips happened, and this lot replaced the canon Law, Shachi, Penguin & Bepo - though Bepo is somehow now a bear. Which means canon Law is now at this Law's apartment with a very different Black Leg than he left in charge of Ceasar. Pretty much everything about this has been belly-laughing hilarious, and I think Oda would appreciate it because it's very true to One Piece's often slapstick humor. Now I can't wait to see what happens next to the "Heart Pirates" because your alternate reality is going to be playing in my head. I faved a couple of your other fics to remind myself to read them, so I think I'll have to do that soon. Thanks for a great time! |
sarge1130 chapter 21 . 3/29/2019 LOL! Sora had learn in a hard way about privacy. Pretty awkward for Law and Sanji to be caught in their 'happy time'. It was quite fun to imagine that scene. Also, I can't stop laughing on how horny these guys are and their sexcapades had put the sex gods and goddesses to shame. I love the convention scene. Quite amusing how Sanji was praised at first and then insulted after. Well, we can meet a lot of people like these and sadly, there are others who doesn't respect other people's space. It's okay to look but it's disrespect to touch any cosplayer without consent. Thank you for this amazing story. It was such a wild ride :D. |
sarge1130 chapter 20 . 3/29/2019 Wow! That was so hot and sexy. Sanji was so scary when he is horny. LOL! I think Law had awaken the beast. Law should not let his guard down of else he will be reaped apart. Also, how can be a timid guy can be a masochist? |
Snowflake97 chapter 21 . 3/28/2019 Aww can't believe it's over already! This story was a wonderful ride. I could always count on you for awesome stories. I think I kind of like the open ending. It helps me to draw a conclusion of my own :) Can't say I won't miss these versions of them but I am also very excited to read your new story! See ya and have a great day :) (P.S: previously guest user) |
sarge1130 chapter 19 . 3/27/2019 I enjoy reading this chapter :). There are so much going on in here and I just can't stop to be entertained in this. The Heart Pirates had survived once again the Vinsmokes' fury and once again, Law is so damn manipulative and a good tactician. It amuses me how Law had also brought condoms. LOL, does he anticipates that Poison Pink will attack him and he wanted to save his cock from the poisonous bottom pink lips? Quite nice that Reiju still supported Sanji in this. Just like in OP, she loves her younger brother. |
sarge1130 chapter 18 . 3/27/2019 OMG! I just can't stop laughing when Law and Sanji are flirting in front of the elder Vinsmoke siblings. Well, I have to wish for Law's luck if he wanted to hold hands with Sanji. |
Asl lover chapter 21 . 3/27/2019 pleaseeee continue this! its so funny and awesome and why the cliffy!? |
VisitorNo.18 chapter 21 . 3/27/2019 Why?! Why did you cliffy?! That was X-Drake! He was the leaks! Aaaaaaghhhh! Law is is the series! Hahahaha! I love this! :D |
Naghi-tan chapter 21 . 3/26/2019 XD pobre Sora xD Me dejas pensando quién será ese hombre que se sabe el nombre de Sanji, tengo tantas teorías owo puede ser el creador, un villano... Hay tantas cosas que puede ser! XD |
sarge1130 chapter 17 . 3/26/2019 I really enjoy reading this chapter. I just love it how the Heart Pirates outwitted Teach even though they are just normal humans. That shows how quick-witted Law is and though the others are reluctant to follow him, Law displays his natural leadership abilities. If he just uses that wisely in this world, then he may end up in top management. It was too bad that he lacks confidence in his abilities. LOL! I really enjoy how Reiju traumatizes the Hearts. Reiju is just a terrifying pervert that even though the strongest human of our world will surely act like a terrified virgin with her actions. |
Guest chapter 20 . 3/26/2019 Oh ho I would love to read some angsty alpha/Omega from you! That would be the best! And this chapter...just let me tell you...you handled the hand holding thing incredibly well :p! I am just glad Law survived! Maybe he does have some latent superpower :p! Loved your story as usual. Have a great day :) |
Naghi-tan chapter 20 . 3/25/2019 Hay que decirle a Law que existe el bondage y Sadomasoquismo~ para poder controlar a Sanji, y conociendo al rubio que es muy servicial y le gusta complacer~ que sexy~ XD Amé a Sora, alarmada porque su hijo estaba con un depredador xD Aaaaaaaa! La imagen de ellos en su momento sexy~ xD |
sarge1130 chapter 16 . 3/25/2019 I was so intrigued who is this Commodus in the Gladiator movie (since I forgot how the character looks like) so I decided to google it during my break. The moment I saw the image, I can't stop laughing. I am trying to imagine Law's new image with that but all I can think of is Enrique Iglesias. LOL. On the side note, I am intrigued why Sanji cares if this Commodus character is handsome. It makes me think that Sanji is somehow physically attracted to Law or maybe since he thought of Law as his enemy, then Law should be acknowledged as a handsome man worth to be defeated. I love how the Heart Pirates are born, lol. Law had become a harbinger of death and it never amuses me how he caused so much bad luck to others. The tavern scene is so much fun to imagine and it seems like even fire seems to avoid them just to avoid accident too. |
VisitorNo.18 chapter 19 . 3/23/2019 The adventure is Over! But domestic life begins! (Sanji leans to use Tinder) ... (I meant Tumblr) and sees Law's art! :D Hey,,, I just thought of something... So you realize that in the Wano arc, Hawkins and Drake were from North Blue and realized Stealth Black too right. I'm gonna go with the idea that they either love Germa like Vito or hate Germa like Law. But in modern AU versions, they would love Sora too. They have Tumblr fan accounts and they can write fanfic and they heart law's post everyday! :D :D :D One time, Law made a fanart for Hawkin's story and they were frinds eversince! :D |