I am getting Jekyll and Hyde vibes from the Voice in Six's head.
So dose this mean the voice is named Seven?

this story is so goood

So Cinder is a good guy as well, didn't see that coming

I’d be happy to exchange some PMs, but first, I’ll review this chapter.

Six has been forced into a situation that many crossover characters find themselves in, and not just REBY or Fallout crossovers, that situation being “adapt or die”. Six may be one of the deadliest people on Earth, but on Remnant, there are other factors that he’s got to learn to adapt too.

Father is... I couldn’t say for certain. The obvious answer in my mind is that Nate kept playing with Synths, maybe trying to make a Synth Shaun, and failed dramatically (or perhaps accidentally succeeded, as the real Shaun was kind of a monster, which would line up pretty well with what Father is doing).

Still, it seems more realistic that Nate was dabbling with powers even further out of his control, perhaps even related to that Alien spaceship that he has. Nate very much comes across as a man who tried to do something that was too ambitious, and he paid the price for it.

I love how Roman perfectly nails that mock insulted tone, well done. Six and Emerald were great, Nate's still got a lot of mystery to him, and I still think the idea of Father is really neat.

Good job mate. Great chapter. I can honestly say I saw no errors in this one. It flowed well, and I enjoyed it. Good job, keep it up.

it was confusing ina cool way, I kind of hate RT as well.

Awesomeness

Awesomeness please continue

I like how you've embraced the homeless and uneducated thing for Six, its rather down to earth tbh...

honestly, with the limited gear you've given him, he's a fair bit less powerful than most crossovers, I doubt that he will mesh well with the atlas culture however

All caught up with this story and all I have to say is that is story is amazing with how many Fallout characters there are.

Personally, I'd like to see one that is about the adventures of Cywren Caster from A Fallout Tale/Another Fallout Tale by Venturian Tale. Heck, the rest of Venturian's Tale series that are of Skyrim and Oblivion would be amazing.

Well now things just got more confusing.

Anyway I think you should give Mercury a Semblance because I honestly think having his dad steal it, was an act of laziness on RT's part. And before anyone says that's not true, I'd like to point out, the out of universe reason why Sun left after Vol 5 was because his weapons were too hard to animate.

Much better than last chapter. Very few mistakes and the flow was good. Good chapter.

Mercury’s Semblance could have something to do with close quarters fighting, something that fits his fighting style.

I see two potential outcomes for what’s going on with “Father” and I love both of them. Looking forward to more.