update please

Did not like the ending. Read something better

GREAT story! Look forward to next chapters

I know you’ve taken a break from writing, but when or if you do return please update this story first! I love everything about it! Hope you’re resting and recharging! We miss you here! ️

I love! So excited for the next chapters!

This is a great story hope you continue. Where did Olivia go!

More please! I keep checking in case my notifications aren't working!

I can’t believe you stopped at that moment! You enjoy giving your fans heart palpitations don’t you?! I love this new story. It’s exciting and different. I’m all in! Cannot wait for the next chapter, OMG! You slay me with your writing every time. Looking forward to to any of you updates, although I want an update every week from ALL of your stories. Keep them coming!

Ooh what a chapter! So great! You already know how much I'm enjoying this different Olivia, she's so mysterious. I feel she has a really interesting backstory and I can't wait to know it. I wish Fitz would have been able to see Liv but at least he has the letter. I'm glad he had some connection to her and I love her goody bag for him because he is going through it. I was really worried about him there for a bit. Glad he made it home and safely. LOLOL. Hope they'll meet up again in the next chapter. Hope Fitz is getting some rest in between the wait though. Heh.

You did it again! I am so in love with your stories, I can hardly breath! If I had the money and the wherewithal, I’d make mini-series of all your stories! To me your butt can write a story! I love this one too! It’s different but has the Fitz and Olivia feel. Keep up your great writing and let this story have at least 30 chapters!

WTFreak! What did she write to him? I know she like him enough to want to see him again...

Uhmmmmmmmm... So she vanishes again... But at least Phillip saw her for himself this time...
So funny I was watching the TV Series Charmed where they can appear and disappear at any moment.

I was so glad he brushed Stella off with her thirsty azz.. He's trying to be nice to her because they have to perform together each night, but she not getting the message. I can't wait until she meets Olivia knowing that she is the one who caught his eye... Can't wait for that day... Lol ;-)
While it's cute, I'm ready for them to get together... meet already in a nice place where they can sit and talk and just look at each other... No rushing into making love... Just enjoy each other for a minute, then ease into the breath taking, heart stopping lovemaking a couple of chapters later... Lol. I can't believe I'm even saying that... Bit I do want them to get to know and really appreciate each other first, before sex cloud their judgment. Because we know he's going to be sho nuff hook once he gets a taste of the cookie and the same for her once the cookie meets cream... And the walls come crashing down around them... Oh my goodness, I'm having too much fun visualizing that day. So... I'm going to stop right here... Cause I definitely want to know what she wrote in that letter...

Yes, she has some good friends, but I need the overbearing Sistas to back off a little. Girlfriend is grown and can handle herself right now... But I want to know who this jerk is who's sending the flowers. I don't recall and I do not want to re-read the other two chapters in case I forgot who he is.. So come on with it Me's, give me some background on him...

Glad Fitz had Phillip to confided in, because George couldn't cross the line too far as Fitz's employee... So let's hop to it... What's go on with Olivia and her vanishing acts. I realizes she a little shy because of who he is, but I need more, more and more... ;-D)))))))))))

Thanks for the chapter... Looking forward to Mooooooooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeee!

Ciao, take care,
Ms. Lady C.

Wow,I can't believe it took me this long to respond after re-reading it again, leaving it and coming back to it... ;-D)))))))))))))))))))))

yes, Olivia put a thang on his heart... She left him feeling like he had just woke up from the most wonderful, unbelieving dream in his life. I'm glad George had the pictures for proof. Otherwise he may have been walking around in a fog... Loved it...

Well let me get to the next Chapter so I can find out what really happens now that things have quieten down for me and I have my mind set to read again... Lol ;-D))))))))))))))))))

Ciao,
Ms. Lady C.

Cool chapter!

This first chapter was really cute! I’m glad you kept going with the story!

Ok...I don't normally post but I am really compelled to! Once again, you have so brilliantly written a masterpiece & mesmerizing story of our "Beloved Fitz & Olivia!" I am *sooo ready to read more,* so please don't keep us waiting too long of...u definitely have my attention. The anticipation is exciting, smh!