| Reviews for A new life |
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Guest chapter 19 . 7/4 Please update, I love it |
angeldunn1993 chapter 19 . 6/9 I love this story it keeps me interested and I can't wait for you to write more. |
Pouika chapter 19 . 6/6 Thank you very much, i'm french and like you i love this fandom and pair. I hope to read your next chapter ! |
dezmonthemoonbear chapter 19 . 5/7 This fic never fails to bring a smile to my face, especially in these hard times. So I have to thank my sister for recommending this fic to me, and to the wonderful author Khvamp for writing this amazing fic in the first place. I look forward to the next update! |
Lina03 chapter 19 . 5/6 Aww...young love...can't wait for more! |
JohnpokiSnar chapter 19 . 5/1 Love it as always :) love the growing relationship |
buterflypuss chapter 19 . 4/29 good chap |
TheCuriousClockwork chapter 18 . 4/23 I love this story and where it's gone! Will love to read more and even thout you did it would be slow burn, I'm totally alright with a time skip to get then older and for the romance to bloom! |
MarMarStar06 chapter 18 . 4/5 I really like this story. You are a great writer. :) keep being you. Love it! |
Janisu chapter 18 . 3/31 Love this story! Can’t wait to see what comes next. :D |
Lucky Lucy Heart chapter 18 . 3/11 PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON! I can’t wait to see the romance develop between Harry and Tsu’ey. I also can’t wait until they become mates! |
BlueMoonChaos chapter 1 . 3/9 Looks like a very interesting read. Unfortunately, I'm having difficulty reading the story because it's hard to tell who is saying what. Normally in written works, what one person says is kept separate from another by making them different paragraphs. Ex: Anna sighed and asked, "What are you doing?" "Not much," replied Avery. "Looks like trouble." Beth smirked at Avery's glower. See? Easy to tell is there are three different people and who is saying what. The way your story (at least first chapter, haven't gone to the next yet) is currently written I have to reread most parts at least twice to get straight who is saying/doing what. It makes it a little difficult to enjoy the story, which is too bad because this does look interesting. |
twinia1 chapter 18 . 2/25 I love it. Please don't stop writing |
OrangeRangerAlex96 chapter 18 . 2/1 I'm enjoying this a lot! I also really like that it's an active story! I would like to suggest on working on your paragraph structure. You tend to not have a new paragraph start whenever a new person is talking. Other than that, I really look forward to reading more! |
Assuncao chapter 18 . 1/4 these two are so cute together :3 |