He is the chosen one, he will bring balance to the force.

I hope you keep the Lucy up skirt part.

Good chapter congrats
And don't think about it everyone have worse days or in this case worse Chapter.
New chapter will be better
Good luck

Not disappointing just a bit messy.

I love your stories, they're amazing and fun to read. So if you have doubts, then just know I'm 100000% your biggest fan

And another great chapter congrats
And please, do not give up.
You are a great writer and mistakes sometimes happen
And one more thing good luck :-)

364wii;

Just to sort out any confusion, its not because Lincoln cum so many times, or deep enough into Lynn's womb, or any other logical factors.

Lynn got pregnant so quick is because Lincoln isn't considered as human anymore. His seed is million times active than most average men and with God blood flowing in him, the baby in the carriage growing faster than most baby, because the baby isn't normal baby. The baby is Demigod.

If there is still a confusion, I will explained everything in the next author's note. If not... I'm still going to explain it :)

Geez Lincoln how hard did u cum?

And another great chapter congrats

A very sexy chapter. But a few practical issues.

While a 12 inch pianist (if you take my meaning) is many men's fantasy to have, I'm pretty sure most women aren't as invested in the idea.

12 inches with the girth you described probably wouldn't be pleasurable for the vast majority of women. It would be agonizing, especially for someone like Lynn or Lucy, who (unless something happened with Francisco or Rocky respectively), are currently virgins.

I hope the next chapter begins with the lemon between Lincoln and Lynn.

So currently Linc's harem is Thicc QT/Queen, Ronnie Anne, Lucy, Renee at the least. Carlota looks to be interested. There are other girls I didn't list I'm sure.

I know you already said you'll do more with Queen in a later Chapter, but I'm really curious when she'll be back in the story. I expect Linc to meet her when she's off-duty, and if he's alone the two hit it off.

Interesting you seem to be trying to "seriously" do a LincxThicc QT pairing. The only other examples I know of are Age Gap by Whimfu1 and a Spanish fic with an aged up Lincoln.

... wow ...

Just got caught up with story. I hope Renee returns, she's based, someone give n word pass. The mayor of Royal Woods is a based black woman, In reality I doubt banning same-sex marriages means a city gets to expel homos, just that the city won't give them marriage certificates. The fight in chapter 7 also confused me a bit, I can get that when Clyde knocked the knife from Renee's hand it could have dropped by close, but the other part where she threw the knife at Clyde, how she get the knife back, or she had multiple knives with her? Also if Rita isn't gonna be in the harem will Penelope be?