You lost me when you got to Snape's history of being raped by Lucius. It's a shame. Good story up till then.

It is perfect... Where is the chapter 15? Please

I just wanted to let you know how much I love this story. Is there any chance for an update?

o, how the hell could you have possibly stopped this fic! Write more! Now. Like as in this instant. Like as in, everything else you write while good should now be on the backburner so you can finish this thing. I mean, TFW is done, you can focus on this thing now.

Gods I love this story!

what do you mean cold? that sounds bad. but the bad has already happened. you remember the four years they spent apart and the self inflicted angst before that? that was the bad in this fic. its suppose to be all sunshine, roses, and happy endings now. not night chills and nightmares. do you understand now? i understand you must have been confused but i can assure you it is deffinitely time for happy endings.

o I really like this! I'm putting it in my favs. Keep writing it, I wanna see what happens. Good job!

Interesting bit at the last of the chapter. I'm curious to know what that was about! _
Ciao _

::groans loudly:: Oh! You cannot stop! gee, this could sound wrong...
Anyway, please continue writing! You have such talent! I'm going to spare you of my whining, though it is hard.
One element I love most in the tale is that it took such a long time for them to even kiss; someone would always pull away. I apologize for not being able to pinpoint something that could be improved...if I think of anything, I'll let you know.
Huzzah!
Talon McGreggor
(Tara)

o dun don da hehehehe update son.

Great writing

Oh, I wonder what the bad dreams are all about. So thrilled to see an update, by the by...

OK, that ending was just creepy.
Are we supposed to know what's going on with Hermione, or is that a new plot twist?
I hate to see signs that the primrose path is about to be strewn with thorns, but I know you'll bring us about to a happy ending eventually, right? After all the angst they've already been through (and we, the readers with them) they deserve a little happiness (and we, the readers deserve a happy ending)!
Thanks for writing!

OMG Ida, what in Gods name have you done to me? Severus is a real sweetie in this chapter; that at least has shown through, but what about Hermione? I want to know what the nightmares are all about! Ida darling, you are a natural born writer, and you know exactly how to make your readers squirm, me in particular. Please, next chappy as soon as you can! Keep up the excellent work on this story; I love it! ~BIF and all that 16 year old Jazz, Amy~

That was so good! I love this fic! I'm so glad that they still like each other, even though a lot of stuff happened. That was so sweet what he did for Lupin and Tonks. Write the next chapter soon! I can hardly wait!