Reviews for ALICE POTTER THE CHESHIRE CAT |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that's one hell a of a hiatus! Seems more like you've just left the story behind on the guise of a hiatus and being done with the story and lying about it like half the people of this platform. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far, ill keep an eye out for updates. I hope you dont forget about this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let's see the reaction of Dumbie when Alice return... |
![]() ![]() ![]() the wheel is turning and Albus' doomed plan is crumbling |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's amusing so far lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() hopefully the goblins can find a loophole |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let's see the next move of Alice and how Dumbie try to counter it |
![]() ![]() ![]() No need to apologize, also happy you managed to get the update done. Am I right to assume Dumbledore's reputation will soon be on the chopping block, also was rita skeeter in beetle form present because I have a feeling she would probably publish Dumbledore's behavior |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope she doesn't lose her magic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're welcome also I very much enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to see how you've pulled the wonderland prank idea off :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have just finished reading what you have produced so far and fine it very enjoyable. The one thing you need to do is to get someone else to proof read your work for typing mistakes. As a professional typesetter in a printing company one of the first things I was taught was that it is hard to see your own typing mistakes. Look forward to more updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just started reading your story and found the first chapter very enjoyable. I especial enjoy the voice that you have given Alice it harkens back to the original Alice in a way but is still in a modern tone. Look forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is an amusing thing to slip into the paperwork |