From the summary, you had my curiosity.

Now, you have my attention.

Interesting story n first n foremost i really hope you are doing alright since the sotry haven't been updated in awhile. I do hope team JNPR can be form n he is slowly heal by the u teraction with them cause i truly believe the combination of nora, ren n pryhha is what he needs to feel human and have a family...the JNPR dynamic is the most interesting and underused for long n epic fic...Rennora has so much potential in drama and adventure with jaune n pryhha...while arkos is perfect for this one...compare to the rest Pryhha can kinda relate to jaune on a superficial level but different enough n mature enough to give him the emotional support he needs and someone he can enjoy a life with n give him a liltle challenge plus zhe won't be the invisible gal n in a reverse fashion he can train her n the rest of team jnpr...Team rwby n jnpr should be kept as it is...i dont see ruby cause too young and her overly innocence in this will make jaune think of her as someone to protect like a sister or a pup while she will think its her responsibility to let him have fun like a big sis both believing they are right n the older sibling the relationship will be fun...while yang...yea not mature enough for the right kind of support n dont mash well with this jaune n not seing it being as fluid in relationship as i can see arkos happening...weiss is a rich gal with daddy issue n arrogant at first which i believe will turn jaune off but in a twist she might fall for him instead for a lil drama after he ask neptune to man up...qlrhough its more of confusion cause teenage drama n still end up with neptune...blake n sun is the most fluid n good flow pair tbh...but another thing is that i am tired of reading good fic ruin by them forcing a jaine n blake together and pain her as the ultimate damsel in distress...its kinda annoying considering her background n the crucial difference between her n the rest of the rwby n jnpr team difference...whatever shit she has 90% is her own doing...yes she is born as a faunus but she is a faunus essentially princess born in menagerie ...the faunus heaven...she barely felt the injustice other feel and she ran away with qhitw fang without fully bothering to learn everything and still in deny and insistance to her view is rught cause death on the rwby highway scene which will be a good point to raise up on the rwby team carelessness...but anyways hope to see more of the story n development and arkos ...really lacking good n long arkos thats develop well with q good story

noice.

Love the story keep up the good work

I love the way you are portraying this story, it’s so captivating while keeping true to Riddick himself. Honestly I want to suggest something to you that I very rarely see in the fandom that I’m sure you can make something great of. Have jaune (dosent necessarily have to be him, it’s can happen in a dire situation naturally) unlock the wolf’s and hawk’s aura.

So much potential and an interesting possibilities of semblances for them to possibly utilize.

As for names, I’d suggest Kyra for the wolf and Amura (sharp sighted , cheerful, intelligent) or Roya (means dream, premonition, vision) for the hawk

Wonderful and glad to have you back. As for names for the wolf and bird just go simple like Fang and Talon.

Today, Winchester, you get fucked.

Sorry bout your sis by the way, shit ought to be tough. Take your time.

you have my condolences sorry for your lost and great chapter by the way

Please update natural selection!

Can you please finish natural selection!

Bruh when are you going to update your Loud House fic you said soon and you're updating the others so stop giving people false promises

I’m gonna be keeping an eye on this story. I really love the direction this is going. Plus Riddick is one of my all time favorite movie trilogies

First love this Riddick is one of my favorite movie series
Second don’t tell the pairing let what ever happens happen that way you don’t get too set on one thing so this could go any way he should meet ren and Nora early maybe Blake too being on the road and all you have been doing awesome keep it up

Excellent update and great work with Jaune having now two animal as company.

Awesome job and Jaune helping Pyrrha making her own fucking choices.