So Naruto is a little fag boy who like taking it up the ass

wukong was the only saving grace

well shit that's gonna be awkward as hell to explain

So naruto is a pussy ass bitch.

well, to be honest, I don't really like how you made Tayuya so freaking old. They should be at the same age! And brothers and sisters?! really? incest? with a really big age gap?

Yeah, no shit, that much was obvious. Still awesome though.

gonna be honest love this story...

that last line of this chap(the big reveal)

I saw this coming from like a 1/4 into the first chapter lol

still love it tho! i just read too much fanfiction to really get suprised these days lol

Oh oh I knew it! I saw it coming! You gave us a Skywalker moment! Hahahahaha can’t wait to read more.

What a twist. Cant say I didn't see it coming but now what will they do? how will everyone reacted? When the information gets out. So many questions can't wait to see what the next chapter has to bring. I am sure of one thing is that a leaf village will never be the same.

P.s wounderfull chapter in my personal opinion a lot better then the 1st chapter.

*Yawn*

This is pretty good so far but the chapters are a little long.

i've read some of chapter 2 and i cant help but ask about tayuya's age in this story, in canon she was 14 during the retrieval, does this mean she is 24-26 in this story?

glad to see kakashi punished; next jiraiya.
Also glad to see hiruzen picked naruto as his heir.
Otherwise didn't really liked how you turned hinata, make her a possessive arrogant bitch was too much.

And big twist at the end, didn't expected naruto and tayuya being sibling.
believed you changed naruto mother for another uzumaki, since it is hard to believe that kushina has two husband (excepted if it is a minato bashing story, and you turned naruto father into sellfish power hungry rapist).
At least i hope as sibling, you will have naruto inherited all his parent powerful bloodline and talents.

interesting.
Poor naruto his life was even worse than in manga.
Please, tell me jiraiya, sakura and kakashi will obtain the karma punishment they deserve.
And naruto will awake all the badass godlike uzumaki bloodline and talents you shown in this flashback, and all his family true intelligence.

great chapter looking forward to more so Naruto is paired with his female summon and Tayuya I assume Tayuya will have other girls competing for Naruto's attention now Ino being one maybe Temari, Samui, and Yugito as well