Reviews for Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone and the Dark Knight
Eat-Write-Repeat chapter 3 . 7/6
Pure blooded muggles! And Lilly was a ‘Squib,’ how on earth didn’t we see that. What a brilliant train of thought, thanks for pointing the pat out!
kg.gutierrez76 chapter 3 . 5/14
Lol... I actually did not read the chapter before I made my inquiries
kg.gutierrez76 chapter 3 . 5/14
You know... I never knew why authors would automatically put Harry in Hogwarts when he's in America... wouldn't it make sense to go to Illvermory(?) first before transferring to Hogwarts? Yeah, I get that Harry wants to be close to his birth parents, but wouldn't he want to be closer to his new family?
jarodtheunreal chapter 8 . 4/23
Cool keep up the good work!
Yuuki-Raijin chapter 8 . 4/14
This is getting better by each sentence. I can't wait for the next chapter.
ShadowRealmComics chapter 8 . 4/12
Hmmm, interesting story you have here. I cannot wait to see where this story goes.
Fast Frank chapter 8 . 4/1
Not even on the train yet and already getting in trouble. :)
Fast Frank chapter 4 . 4/1
So much for Hogwarts's vaunted unplottability. I assume that Zatanna told Bruce something that made Ilvermorny not a viable option.
Fast Frank chapter 3 . 4/1
I would have thought Bruce would have gone to Zatanna after the vase incident. Dumbledore is not looking particularly competent.
CrystalKaouri chapter 8 . 3/23
Okay, I am REALLY confused.

You make it sound like you intend for Dumbledore to be a bad guy, but what I got from his point of view in the chapter was nothing more or less than an old, tired man overburdened with more cares than he should have, as well as barely a tenth of the information he needs to be able to do his job. I know I asked before what you intended, because I've had to drop so many stories because they made a good guy in the original content evil, but now I'm asking you point blank: am I going to have to walk away from yet another story for that same reason?

So, Harry now know's the Bat Secret. This complicates things a bit, to quote Ron Weasley. Please don't make Bruce be harsh on him, he had no possible way of knowing what he was going to find. He's an eleven year old boy, for cripes sake! Everyone is too curious at that age. And I was wondering if you plan to have the family take a shopping trip to Diagon Alley together.

All in all, while very confusing, it was still a satisfying read.
James Birdsong chapter 8 . 3/23
Cool. Good work
SkylerHollow chapter 8 . 3/23
Thanks for the chapter.
AlchemyWriter chapter 8 . 3/22
Gasp! Harry just learned Bruce’s secret! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
libraryrockerr chapter 8 . 3/22
Busted!

Also, Dumbles, nothing is your fault right? :D

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ALL YOUR HARD WORK!
libraryrockerr chapter 3 . 3/22
Dumbledore is such a cunt.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ALL YOUR HARD WORK!
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