Oh wow love this fanfic and will read the rest of this story soon. Never played the game hahaha but totally like it now!

Thank you for talking the time to continue! Your characters are so accurate, descriptions are precise and pleasant to read. The Way you portray Connor too, almost human... Almost. This was an amazing chapter too!

gotta say I am loving this story for both the nostalgia of it following the original "timeline" but also the new events being changed for the better~ :D

Interesting we now have a serial killer android

Holy cow, this chapter was amazing! First off, your characterization of Nick is so interesting. The fact that you made him violent and psychotic rather than "good" like most of the other deviated androids makes sense, considering his background. Kara's flaw of her blind trust is greatly highlighted in this fic and has actual repercussions rather than in the game. So I'm excited to see how her character changes from this experience. Or does she die? Also, I'm totally looking forward to Connor's plot. The way he is written and his relationship with Amanda is really refreshing. It's nice to see a fic where he is not constantly fighting with her. And hopefully, the revolution is better planned and prepared. Anywayyys, thank you for writing such an amazing fic. I'm excited to read what you upload in the future.

Interesting!

Interesting story!
Keep writing.

Interesting chapter, especially the part with Marcus, the junkyard, his PTSD. You described it really well... you describe everything pretty well in general. Please keep up, your story is inspiring, full of amaing ideas.

Please don't stop writing, I love this!

Awesome chapter and I look forward to the next one.

This is a really cool story so far and I look forward to reading more.

Such a good start! Excited to see how you continue the story :-)