| Reviews for Family Secrets |
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mendenbar chapter 24 . 10/13 I am currently re-reading all your Luciferian fics and it aggravates the heck out of me that FFN will only let you leave one review per chapter. I frequently find other things in chapters that I would like to comment on. Sigh. Anyway, here's hoping you finish all your WIP's! |
Whovian Sherlockian Potterhead chapter 24 . 10/6 Yay! You update this story God and Lucifer’s interactions tho, they’re quite interesting, Luci such a child hehehehe Can’t wait for the update! |
Adriana chapter 24 . 10/5 Que bueno que has vuelto a actualizar esta historia. Es una de mis favoritas Ya quiero leer si pasará algo en ese paseo padre e hijo. . . |
goldenzingy46 chapter 23 . 8/31 ! vv good |
Zenny01 chapter 23 . 7/24 This is so good! I love the direction you took this story in. Can’t wait for more! |
Teran chapter 23 . 6/25 I am so happy that you continue with this story. I am glad that Lucifer starts to feel a little bit better now but I am really unhappy with Chloe and the others. Based on their conversation they don't believe in him, don't allow him any controll. If you already feel down that won't make it better - if Lucifer gets back - a little bit of his own personality - I imagine he will push back even more, make him more angry. But as he sees his anger as a problem now - that he sees himself as betraying his father I guess he will not see this as positiv? Really looking forward how the story continues. There are so many possibilities... are his siblings trying to archive their goal of pushing him back to hell. I could very well imagine that they are trying to find something and make it happen. I mean none of them knows what trully happened between him and his mother - they still see him as evil, right... |
Adriana chapter 23 . 6/15 Ya extrañaba muchísimo la actualización de esta historia (y esperó con muchas ansias la actualización de "Desterar al diablo" son mis dos historias favoritas). Sin duda era de esperar el enojo de Lucifer con Amenadiel después de todo tardo mucho en pedir perdón y que escogiera hasta ahora haría dudar a muchos. Me encantó ver/leer jeje de nuevo el fuego de Lucifer, porque para bien o para mal con engaño o sin engaño de su madre no por nada ha sido el diablo por mucho tiempo, él tuvo que adaptarse al infierno y es algo que no puede olvidar así de fácil. Ojalá puedas actualizar más seguido porque sin duda voy a esperar con muchas ansias los próximos capítulos (De ambas historias ) |
Laetitia-chan chapter 23 . 6/15 Haaaa, ravie de vous retrouver ! Chouette chapitre ! A la fin, j'ai cru que Lucifer finirait par leur balancer quelque chose dans la figure ! J'ai hâte de voir la suite ! Bisous |
Moniurek chapter 23 . 6/14 Great chapter :). Amanediel FINALLY apologized |
TheWitch243 chapter 23 . 6/14 *thumbs up* |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19 Love the story , please update, Great Job |
Helena.G.Wells chapter 22 . 4/27 Plz update, this story is awesome! |
ViktoriaLeStrange chapter 22 . 4/8 this is sad and beautiful at the same time |
Adriana chapter 22 . 4/4 Es muy buena tu historia. La intriga que la Diosa de la creación metió en sus hijos y Dios contra Lucifer fue sorprendente, así como la forma sutil que manipuló a Lucifer. Por favor no me digas que este es el final de la historia |
Wolcen chapter 21 . 3/24 I think one of the real problems I have with your version of 'God' is that he believes that one should only make there own decisions once he deems them mature enough. Like even little children have a right to make choices that will effect them. People often know what is good for them better then anyone else (sometimes people choose the bad option even though they know it will end badly for them, but that does not mean they are not aware). I dislike how that devalues Lucifers feelings like they don't matter. "Oh you would have gotten freedom eventually if you waited" What he heard was this was your fault. I know best. As a teenager you didn't deserve to choose because you obviously would make the wrong choice. You show how his mother had an abusive relationship with some of the angels, but Lucifers relationship with his father is a very unhealthy one. If you are constantly heatedly arguing with someone and it comes to blows that is an unhealthy relationship. If a relationship revolves around how the other person wants to do things (ie Gods this way or the high way) that is unhealthy. If you feel guilty about taking time for yourself or are not aloud to (ie going to earth, leaving hell, being forced to be somewhere he doesn't feel safe like heaven) that is unhealthy. Another sign your in an unhealthy relationship is they put you down (dont support your hopes and dreams/ Lucifer wanted to make his own choices, if he was to live with them he wanted to be the one who made the mistake, God doesn't support or acknowledge Lucifers wants). Anyone that says or imply that ones goals are dumb are not people you want to be around. If you feel insecure in a relationship like if you do or say something wrong they will leave you that is unhealthy. If there abusive (ie in the show God caste his son down from heaven and caused him to burn alive until the scars where permanent even with super healing) that is unhealthy. Isolation is unhealthy and abusive which is shown by Lucifer literally being unable to see anyone that he might have once trusted in heaven and having whatever safety net ripped away in the process of his fall. This is shown again when Lucifer is taken from his close friends besides Chloe on earth and put where he is not sure he can trust anyone. His father could have watch him at his actual house and wear his therapist and people he thinks highly of are. If you have to change yourself to be what they want the relationship is unhealthy. Lastly is that if a person is unhappy and being around the other person makes them miscible that is an unhealthy relationship. I think that some of this is important because Lucifer does know a therapist and she would know these signs (and just one of those sign showing up is a good reason to leave a relationship), but I also think this would mean that Lucifer would have a choice in how he reconciles or if he even does with his family. Lucifer should have had a choice if he wanted them in his life and how they made it in his life. I get that Lucifer needed to be watch because he was in a bad place, but that doesn't mean all his concerns and opinions should be discarded. Lucifer has made a life in LA with people he trust they are one of his safety nets when he gets lost and needs a hand. Sorry to rant like that. I realize this is just fiction and not something to be taken too seriously, but I dislike how unhealthy behavior patterns are presented as alright just because the other person in the relationship is thought of as good. If this was a real relationship I would have recommend that Lucifer cut contact with his father and only meet him on his terms in a place he feels safe on his relationship with his father just with canon info. Please dont think this means I dont love your story, I do. I love that you have Lucifer talking about some of his issues with people and that you are showing some of other people thought and feelings on things. That really well though out and it means that as a reader I can see bits and pieces of Lucifer healing as things that have been left to fester get out. I just wish that some of these unhealthy behaviors are addressed or brought up. I'm hoping the psychiatrist will be brought into this at some point, given that she is someone Lucifer already feels comfortable confiding in and that she wont try to tell Lucifer he is wrong to feel a certain way and instead will try to make Lucifer figure out for himself what he needs and wants even when others might not agree. I am a psychologist myself so its hard for me to root for the repaired relationship between Lucifer and his father (and his siblings somewhat) when I see it as so unhealthy and against his own wishes in many ways. |