| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Children of the Atom |
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N. A. Wennerholm chapter 5 . 10/9 Every mutant and Wizard who has committed murder needs to be executed for it. After all the God Given Penalty for murder is death. Take a life to lose your life. So you can't another life. And what has happened is not Harry's fault it is the fault of those who chose to commit intentional murder. |
Bronze chapter 2 . 8/30 Ya know, with all the shit ol' Fumblemort has piled on Harry since 1981, I'm truly surprised Harry didn't tell the Professor he refused to return to Hogwarts as it simply wasn't safe. Of course, he'd then have to explain why he feels that way. And that might just be quite the eye opener to the Professor. After all, with the spy network Fumblemort has throughout the castle how did he miss Quirrelmort going after the stone in '91? Or that Ginny was the one to open the Chamber of Secrets in '92? Why does he allow Snape to harass Harry in and out of class? Why does he allow Snape to take excessive points form the other three Houses and give excessive points to his own? Why has he NEVER ONCE checked up on Harry's supposed home life to ensure he IS being treated properly? How is it that the Medinurse Madam Pomphrey NEVER treated Harry's malnutrition or starvation from the Dursleys? Things like this make me wonder what type of school Fumblemort is actually running there in Scotland. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30 Please to explain how Kurt could be clumsy? As Knightcrawler he was a cercus acrobat and is known to be quite agile. I've never before heard of a Canadian being called a Canucklehead. A Canuck yes, but never the other. I really don't understand Hermione allowing herself to have sex with Ron. Most of the time he's at best a deadbeat at worst dumber than a rock. Once he learns Harry's a mutant he'll once again turn on him. The fool has no loyalty to his suppose friends. I'm truly not sure he's loyal to anything but food, Quidditch, chess or sleeping. He's bailed on Harry every chance he's got. Ya, I know so far he's only abandoned Harry two times so far as this assumes canon till now. But unfortunately, he's a parasite dragging Harry down. Now Hermione on the other hand has almost always been loyal to Harry. She is Harry's true bestfriend. Though there are stories where she's used Harry like several other supposed friends. Most especially Fumblemort. Who in many stories stole from Harry. In one I read he opened the Potter family vaults to anyone and everyone to take whatever they wanted and what they didn't they burned to ash. I don't remember if it was during the war with Riddle or shortly thereafter that was done. But I do remember Harry lost his minders and escaped England to Japan. There he proposed some very innovative tech and became the richest wizard/muggle in the world. Unfortunately I don't know how it ended as I lost the story before I could finish it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24 Good start to the story. |
Lordlexx chapter 3 . 5/16 Sooo Mystique is a pedo... |
Lordlexx chapter 1 . 5/16 Cerebro doesn't just find mutants like that. It's a program that lets him know where to aim his psychic abilities. It uses all forms of media like online newspapers, social media stuff like FB and Twitter, reports and things in that vein to narrow down the search parameters. It actually is a hacking program too. It IS possible for him to find a mutant without that if they are giving off enough psychic waves or he was looking in that area already. Unless he was looking purposefully at the Hogwarts area then he shouldn't have found Harry. They also don't just take people like he was suggesting. They give them the option, if they are in a potentially dangerous situation then they would remove them from the danger and then give them an option. Kurt is German and has a heavy German accent. And I am glad you already advertised that this is a HHR story. Not only do you already have Hermione and Ron having sex, Jean is with that fuckwad Scott. Though with those two already having sex it still a turn off for the story to be honest.. |
andjelija.nenic chapter 6 . 9/3/2019 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 1 . 6/2/2019 Every mutant and Wizard who has committed murder needs to be executed for it. After all the God Given Penalty for murder is death. Take a life to lose your life. So you can't another life. And what has happened is not Harry's fault it is the fault of those who chose to commit intentional murder. |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 5 . 6/2/2019 It looks like all the Wizards who are just as bigoted towards mutants quite frankly need to be spanked and then threatened to lose their magic. Treat mutants and mundanes as equals get to keep your magic. Don't lose them. |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 5 . 6/2/2019 Only evil monsters would go after someone's family and loved ones. |
Khatix chapter 1 . 9/22/2018 Im sorry but i can't see Harry getting with Hermione after he walked in in her riding Ron in her bed especially after they never told him they were even dating. So she liked him but would rather have sex with Ron than admit her feelings for him and Hr/R NEVER makes sense. How the fuck a genius and hard working girl like Hermione can fall for a lazy always eating and dumb boy is moronic. |
RuetheWierdo chapter 1 . 9/14/2018 What exactly is the ship in this story? |
Gregory H Flores chapter 13 . 3/25/2018 Dudeman that was awesome!, I really loved it, never, and I mean never give up on your talent |
Rhino109 chapter 2 . 10/12/2017 The story seems decent so far but I do hope that the frankly terrible grammar discontinues eventually. |
DaSalvatore chapter 3 . 9/11/2017 There aren't enough Hp/X-Men crossovers and even less that I enjoy. This one, unfortunately, doesn't make the second list. You've got a mutant shapeshifter impersonating a teenage witch in a school for magic. Not only that, but the girl in question would also be at the/near the top of the class. There is no logical explanation for -why- Mystique is suddenly doing this nor -how- she hasn't been caught over the fact she either can't do magic or her practical and encyclopedic knowledge is suddenly non-existent. It's far too much an evil plot for evil plot's sake. So do be careful next time and don't throw out twists unless they actually work. |