Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

I just discovered the story I hope you continue it and I hope you're safe during this covid-19 crisis. that person who's a total wanker can go somewhere if they don't like it why you read it pretty simple. I think your cover art just fine.

I can’t wait for the next update

please update, it's interesting

update soon, please. You'r right, skipping what remains the same makes sense, only if it allows you the time to complete your vision, which, it's very interesting. Again, I hope You continue soon.

Love it . Can't wait for more

Honestly it’s fine there’s no point in writing it out if nothing major changes from the canon events.

Honestly thank you for not writing that part. I love to read naruto fanfics, but that part is done so much that it juat gets boring. So I thank you.

I’ve only just started reading your fanfic and I’m in love with it, I can’t wait for you to update it

So Naruto is going to prank them, right? At least Kakashi. Since Kakashi seems to want to start a prank war. :P

I absolutely love this story so far. Keep up the great work you are doing with the story

I don’t know if anyone has mention this are you trying to say that they spotted her a bowl or are you trying to say that they are treating her to a bowel. Just asking for clarification. Thanks Good story.

Some little mistakes. But love it. Can't wait for your next update. Thanks for a great story.

I’m sorry to say, but I agree with duchessliz. The story is fantastic and I was really enjoying it... but I draw the line at sexualizing children and minors. That outfit is just... a big no-no for me, and it makes me very uncomfortable that you went there. I’ll be unsubscribing from this story. I hope you continue to write and I also hope that everyone else can enjoy this fic, but it’s just not for me anymore. Happy writing.

The story is great, but I can't get over your choice for Naruto's outfit. I've tried to pretend she's wearing something else in my own mind, but your pic for the story always reminds me and it bothers me because a 12 or 13 year old, no matter how developed shouldn't be wearing something like that. And as a ninja it's not exactly safe, if you think about it, anyway. You go through poison ivy or oak by accident and bam she's covered in rashes in the most UNCOMFORTABLE places. She gets injured and has to travel by land or falls from a tree in a fight or something and will get scratched the hell up. My mind just can't work with it so... I'm very sorry, but I'm going to drop your story. Other than that one issue though, your story is golden so please don't let anything I said discourage you, it's really personal preference and my own mind that won't let go of stupid crap. Sorry. Keep up with your writing though and I wish you the best!