| Reviews for A New Beginning |
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   eprince200 chapter 30 . 7/27 i didn't even realize that you were responding to me as i made more and more reviews most people ignore them is daisuke a dragon, or a saiyan or some crazy creature inheritance? |
| eprince200 chapter 27 . 7/27 have them fuck |
| eprince200 chapter 25 . 7/27 fight the power! /\ harem? it seems more then likey, but i gouged myself on fanfic so i might have a weird perspective |
| eprince200 chapter 24 . 7/27 harem harem harem harem harem lots of kids / real shit, thought sodom and gomorrah when down way to easy, but i think that it fits perfectly with the fic that your writing and the fight scene was actually awesome |
| eprince200 chapter 22 . 7/27 god is dead and we killed him! -4-chan, circa 2012 |
| eprince200 chapter 21 . 7/27 hey yeah! i like the way way it's going but he needs to be more open to the females! make this story rated m and show me the money! \\ ok real talk thought i hope that the twist is that he was altered by great red or ophis and is part dragon or some shit cause that would be awesome, |
| eprince200 chapter 19 . 7/27 haha kinks harem, have him fuk them all! |
| eprince200 chapter 16 . 7/27 love the throw back he is a little bit... one dimensional? but it works out fine. i like the way that you made kiba |
| nathan.vuong.5 chapter 26 . 7/27 Wont lie, an oc just won't have the same level of attachment as a story character does, besides the mc of course. |
| STRELOK474 chapter 36 . 7/16 Good work! Can't wait to see more! |
| Guest-Questioner chapter 36 . 7/16 Whoa-hoa newest chapter, pretty simplistic but it's okay! I do not believe you'd entirely remember my "identity" from some earlier chapter's. (i'm not very good at ANY form of commentary, what-so-ever) I'm honestly surprised you managed this far, without going too far, into Overpowered O.C too much. Ahem, A Susano'o knockoff..? THAT will be something! Gasper, may need to wear more, stay-at-home, generic clothe's to get started on more, male tendencies to manifest, stay-at-home short's, with pocket's, to put his hand's into, so as too keep his limbs on his side's instead of infront on his torso. Gasper also, may need to have his towel, merely pushed down to the waist, he wraps up, as he does, but merely settles' it, on his waist after. Both of which are a generic form of, becoming more male minded, but easy to do, ya'know? Bonus Information: T.N.K The company that worked on the first three season's, had FAR TOO MANY, liberties, when it came too making the anime, THAT IS WHY, it was, what it was. T.N.K are at fault for the first three season's, so when it switched to another company, the head manager stated, READ EVERYTHING, DON'T MISS A SINGLE, TINY, MOMENT! That is how season four, came to be, SO, should the anime manage to move forward, YOU, CAN, BET, for the most part, that season four and onwards, will DEFINITELY, be following the light novel, AS CLOSE, AS HUMANLY, possible. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/15 Hanwei is definitely gay. He cant go back to his world without rias or killing rias, the evil pieces upon leaving their masters start to mutate the reincarnated devils into stray devils. Kuroka killed her master, which may have cut the link to mutate her, after all the evil piece system is a slave system and there are punishments for running away, hanwei's fate is linked to rias until he becomes a king possibly. |
| josepantzay2 chapter 16 . 7/14 Me gusta |
| josepantzay2 chapter 2 . 7/14 Excelente |
| AngelFaux chapter 36 . 7/13 So his Balance Breaker is Susanoo...cool. Also since he already has Rasenshuriken. What are your thoughts on Daisuke recreating Dust Release? You could work with Rias since her Power of Derstruction is a good foundation to start with. Being able to disintegrate matter on a molecualar level is awesome. The appartment upgrade was a fun suprise. And looks like it's time for the true training montage |
