| Reviews for The Gilbert Witch (UNDER EDITING ON HOLD) |
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bookdragonss chapter 2 . 2/8 name for shop: maurerders den original love interest: kol or klaus |
Jcassie chapter 4 . 12/26/2019 Hmmm no hayley please and definitely no one night stand for both hayley and victoria. How about where they just fall in love over time. And no getting pregnant either at least not so soon not like the original. |
Padfootette chapter 5 . 12/17/2019 I love this story and hope you update soon |
alicia7788 chapter 5 . 5/31/2019 UPDATE PLEASE |
nrkucher chapter 4 . 4/30/2019 ya |
Jocelyn chapter 2 . 3/1/2019 Loved the story I don’t mind, that Kol and Victoria have a relationship or Witch friend or have a baby together. Or with Elijah and baby When will you update this story? |
Avathar chapter 5 . 3/1/2019 I'm glad your still continuing this story I really liked the first two chapters the idea for your story is great and I always liked rebekah in the vampire diaries and originals so her having a close friend will be nice and I'll enjoy reading it. I'm glad your editing as though I really enjoyed what you've written so far the conversation is a bit jarring at times and could flow smoother and it could be nice to have her arrive back a bit earlier though that doesn't matter too much to me. I'm looking forward to when you start updating again I really want to read more of the story. |
Jocelyn chapter 2 . 2/26/2019 Victoria and Klaus relationship with baby hope, Tori’s to-be hybrid Victoria’s café is Café Gardania, Tori’s own place to live maybe apartment or mansion, Jeremy to stay or live with Tori’s. More of Elena bashing Tyler and Hayley together |
Jocelyn chapter 4 . 2/26/2019 Victoria and klaus relationship with baby. Tori café is Café Gardania Tyler and Hayley together |
SakiHanajima1 chapter 3 . 2/28/2019 Ehhhh, Kol. There are a lot of Klaus/Fem!Harry fics but no Kol fics. Be a rebel and write Kol. You can have her still replace Hayley, Klaus and her stepson together could be done using magic so neither one knows what’s exactly going on. So she gets pregnant.. that’ll be a hell of a fight between Kol and Klaus though.. but Kol is just so much better. Orrrr keep with her Klaus and make an actual relationship happen. |
SakiHanajima1 chapter 2 . 2/28/2019 I’m glad this is on hold.. there are a lot of grammatical errors and spelling errors. The idea is great, just remember to keep the characters.. in character. |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2019 Yes |
BloodRedWriter chapter 4 . 2/19/2019 I think she should stay with Klaus and if you want someone to help Tyler then have Hayley help him. |
little-bast chapter 4 . 2/18/2019 So I like the idea of Tori replacing Hayley but it developing into more of a relationship.. will Tori be the mistress of death or will having a hybrid baby cause her to become a hybrid with magic? Tyler I would like to break the sire bond but since Tori might be having a baby with Klaus that they become friends to keep Tori happy! |
gypsygirl368262 chapter 4 . 2/18/2019 yes! please get rid of Hayley and Tyler and give Victoria Klaus! and if you still want Hope in there make Victoria have it her plzzzzzzzz! |