Well that was an interesting end also good fic

Oooh this is really good. You do intrigue and romance very well loved the bit with jaune and ruby at the end.

Can’t wait to see what comes next.

another great chapter

That romantic bit at the end was so good. Your grimm ideas are also really good. better than winged gorillas by a mile, thumbs up Liked and subscribed.

well thats cute liking the lancaster here !

very nice so far keep it up!

I'm about half done with the chapter, by I've noticed a mistake that I need to point out.
When you write the characters talking, you are consistently using the apostrophe to mark their speech. Use quotation marks instead. The purpose of the apostrophe is to show either one noun possessing another noun, or is to show a contraction of two words. These sorts of mistakes are pretty common in foreign English speakers, and its still readable, but I'd advise editing it anyways. For reference, the quotation mark key on a keyboard is the same as the apostrophe, you just need to press shift when you hit the apostrophe key. At least, that's how it works on my keyboard
Otherwise, cool premise, and fairly pleasant writing. Good job so far.

Pretty interesting start i like the look into the atlas's less "legal" research and experimenting on live grimm.
This is a pretty dangerous ruby is playing and i hope she finds jaune before this gets worse
Ps:is weiss the next Jacques schnee?

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