Reviews for Detective Midoriya
Bunkerbird25 chapter 42 . 3h
I love the story, I don't know if you've completed it yet but I still can't wait for the next chapter to come out! Keep up the amazing work!
ChaoticInscriber chapter 26 . 7/21
It's probably a good thing they stalked him on the "date". If only because if Anything had happened while the Pack was captive, they would have been in So Much Trouble for taking it...
Annoying to him, yes, but a practical precaution even if that was not at all why they did it.
Still thinking on a username chapter 42 . 7/20
oh wow, I forgot this was all written out in the first chapter. Usually I am against any deus ex machina, but right now I sure hope for one
Guest chapter 42 . 7/18
omg this story is AMAZING! Sad it has to end though... But anyway, i have a fun ride reading this. Thank you for sacraficing your time to write this story.
ChaoticInscriber chapter 16 . 7/18
Damn, I rather regret that no one in-story heard that line. "In direct opposition to Aizawa's request to stay away from things that might kill him, Izuku raised a hand. 'Hi Kacchan.'"
Aizawa would facepalm, and several people would dogpile Bakugou in retaliation for the implication that just being there and greeting him could be fatal to their darling Zuzu. XD
ChaoticInscriber chapter 15 . 7/18
Honestly something akin to those "Chinese Finger Traps" is exactly the kind of thing they need to use as a standard with any and all possible "Five Finger Activation" type Quirks - it's too common a trigger/facet to ignore, and either a finger trap or mittens would be perfect. Actually, while mittens duct taped to the hands would work fine on Quirk's like Ochako's, a more destructive type like Shigaraki has needs those multiple finger traps- he can touch a mitten with all five fingers (unless the thumb and hand parts are entirely detached and thus count separately) and it would fall apart and thus be useless after seconds but the traps trapping fingers from opposite hands means there aren't five fingers on either hand available to touch any one of them to get them off!
ChaoticInscriber chapter 3 . 7/18
As entertaining as an Enraged Mom Smackdown, verbal or otherwise, can be, given Inko's Quirk I had an idea of what at least one tidbit of less than positive interactions between them could include.
Atomic Wedgies.
It's not like he's got a lot on his Super Suit to yank on, after all, and if she doesn't want to escalate the trouble she can get charged with yanking on organs outside of a life or death crisis is probably a bit much.
Had she been near him much much closer to when he initially crushed Izuku, though...
EndlessChains chapter 42 . 7/18
A well done chapter. Nicely done with the anticipation of the two gangs fighting as the plan that Izuku came up with was up in flames. The descriptions of the situation that they found themselves was well done with how it went from different point of views. Going to the police station that went into a flurry of action to make sure that nothing bad or worse happens to gathering the proper heroes to prevent any further trouble. It was interesting how Izuku was able to get the two gangs to try and negotiate with one another to stall for time until the heroes and police arrive. Now we reach the present time of Izuku getting shot and I can't wait to see what takes place after. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
airunee chapter 41 . 7/18
Can I just say, Shinsou being so deadpan with everything is one of the best things in this fic xD He's honestly so relateable that it's hilarious
Guest chapter 13 . 7/15
mori be like: I don’t really wanna do the work today, I don’t really wanna do the work today, I don’t really wanna do
the work
today
I don’t
wanna do the work today
Guest chapter 11 . 7/15
“YoUr’E nOt mY dAD!”
Guest chapter 9 . 7/15
oof
Guest chapter 8 . 7/15
he is lord, the duck is lord, he is lord lord lord the duck is lord
Guest chapter 12 . 7/15
Not too many people end up with their first love. I feel as if the only reason that Izuku likes Uraraka is cuz she was the first girl that talked to him friendly... Oh man, I don't get the hype. But if it continues to develop, I'll skip that and focus on the other aspects of this amazing story. Great chapter!
Guest chapter 11 . 7/15
People who usually state that they're not confident in fighting scenes, are usually the ones that make them good! And you're no exception to that, I love it! Great job!
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