Hey man love the story so far and let me just say I was adamant about reading this fic since I don't condone nor subscribe to H-Anime or H-Manga. I glad I decided to read it though now to my review. I truly enjoy our fic and wanted to do my own Warframe fic but in a more science fiction world so I can use to e Orbiter and the big sip I forgot the name of in the Dojo and wanted to ask if it would be cool to use the main characters Warframes you have in this fic. If not its cool I'll just try to use a different frame since even I don't have them all. Anyway enjoy and keep writing until next time ja-ne.

It is just me or the axe part of this chapter looks familiar to another fic?

While i love the curbstomps and dont mind self insertslemon, i noticed that some of the texts bear resemblance to someone else's fic
Bruh wtf its plagiarizing

Love the idea of Warframe and Kuroinu crossover. I will continue to follow for more chapters and love scenes.

This entire fic is an attack of good taste.
Whatever masturbatory fantasy lead you to write this wasn't worth it.

This chapter is just blatantly ripping off the kuroinu hexen fanfic.

Going high profile in this encounter, eh? I don't blame Aaron, especially with what happens to Grace and Anna in canon.

So you're splitting Chapter 10 into parts, too? I can see why. Writing all perspectives of the three main Tenno and their companions would get too long.

Rising of the Shield Hero and Kuroinu

That bloody bastard (Hector) is dead and serves him right for being arrogant. I gotta feeling that Grace gonna become part of Squall's harem. He's one lucky guy.

They better eliminate Shamuhaza and I really don't like his experimenting of insects.

The Black Dog Rebellion on Eostia still continues, the Alliance and the Tennos will WIN! Vult/Volt/Vault and the Black Dogs must be brought to JUSTICE for what they've done to the people of Eostia and his allies will also be punished.

I'll wait to read the next chapter.

warframe vanadis crossover ? please

Hey, do you mind, if you have a chance to do so, make another story once you are done with the Warframe x Kuroinu story? Maybe a My Hero Academia x Kuroinu crossover story. I really like the story you have so I would really love it if you could make the My Hero Academia x Kuroinu.

Well, the Kubrows is now in the story and I love seeing/imagining the Pink Princes Prim befriend with Fenris its really adorable! I must be dreaming, I better pinch myself. *Pinching my cheeks with pain* Ow! Definitely not dreaming.

I wonder if Charles, Ryan, and Aaron would bring their families from Earth to settle on Eostia so they can meet their boys' lovers after the war and its funny to imagine if their mothers would squeal in happiness that they'll be expected their grandchildren while their fathers would congratulate their sons that they finally become REAL MEN.

I'll wait to read the next chapter. Stay strong and good healthy everyone!

Wow. I'm sorry, but...

This is quite possibly one of the worst fics I've read. Not because of grammatical errors (the structure of this story is actually pretty solid so kudos to you for that), but because of the borderline blank slate main cast. Why make them inserts? Why not just make them Tenno? Their schools and beliefs would have made their interactions with the Eostia cast much more interesting. Despite popular headcanons, the *real* Tenno are, in fact, heroes dedicated to defending those who can't defend themselves. I mean, just look at Fortuna. Literally nobody asked them to help, they just did because they decided to. There was nothing worthwhile in it for them.

But instead, *because* they're inserts, not only do they act like shits, a few of them know everything about everything. That's just... Boring info dumping. Heck, at least one of the inserts even comes off as a combat happy psycho.

And for some reason, when it comes to the Warframes and Operators themselves, you're working off of video game logic, using ability names, levels, and pause menus. It's unnecessary to have those written as it just clutters the story and makes it awkward to read. You're even unintentionally limiting the frames potential by doing so when, in canon, the the Tenno are capable of much *much* more. Example, Inaros becoming a planet wide sandstorm, or Mag redirecting a wall of bullets back at Grineer.

Now we got a rapist acquiring a Sentient/Shadow Stalker powerup...

I don't know how to properly describe my displeasure with this fic, and I really don't mean to come off as rude, so I apologize if I do. But this just feels... Bad.

I wish you the best of luck, no sarcasm whatsoever. But I will not be reading any more of this.

UP DATE THE .

I think that Olga, Chloe and Alicia are descendants of the ancient Tennos in Eostia perhaps the same with the other shields. Because if they are not, how come they could use transference or have the warframes calling to them like they recognized their owners.