‘Every time myth showed in the boys eyes’ – I think you mean mirth.

Clairi was sodding! You can’t say that it is rude. You mead sobbing.

Girls are diffidently noticing him. - Do you mean diffidently or definitely?
…on the team than McCormack. - Do you mean Cormac McLaggan?
Has Fred actually purposed? - I think you must have been half asleep when you wrote this

I think you mean subtle rather than suddle. You did get a bit careless with other words in this chapter as well.

Beetle on the wall. Here goes!

lol I enjoyed reading this story and catching up. I love that Hermione and Clairi are cousins and are close. I also love that Harry has more family.

Wow! Checkmate! I enjoy reading this chapter and story! Clairi is so clever, cunning at times, but still pure of heart.

Wow! I really enjoyed reading this chapter!

Huh, interesting how Harry is still the Boy-Who-Lived while there were other two young children there. Will we find out how they were saved/taken out of the house?

Aww, this chapter was cute. I find it interesting that there is an oc Potter.

Aww poor baby. I enjoyed reading this story. I like how the Tonks took Claire in, and Claire's young personality.

Severus surname is Snape not snap. There are amny words you need to check on in this chapter.

Remus Surname is Lupin not Lupine.

Why were they starving them with bars on their window as Dobby had not come yet?

You call George Garage in this chapter.