Those bastards!

I find it so fucked up that they all claim to be family, but at the end it was all a lie. One way or another they all backstab each other notwanting happiness for Arthur went he deserved it most.

I know a lot of ppl here love Susan, but she deserved that shotgun to the face.

Excellent work !

"I've got a plan."

Uh oh.

I love how when you switch the POVs you explain the emotions and dig deeper into the background of the characters, awesome work as always !

Ohhhhh Dutch noooooo...

But at the same time yeeeesssssssss.

wow who would have thought Grimshaw could be so evil :O

Oh my God. She was the girl that Durch killed.

That's it, I'm crying... I read a lot of fanfictions but this Is the first time I feel this. It feels real and natural an true. The way they fall in Love Is just wonderful. Thank you for allowing me to feel this!

"One for the journal" I love it! It's so Arthur-like (and very romantic)

OH MY GOD I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH, I love how you discribe Arthur because that's exactly how I see him, and I love your protagonist! She is awesome ! I fell in love with your story!

I like the deer protecting his doe and fawn metaphor. I've sort of used that too in the past.

I really hope things go well for them or at least for Emelia if you go with the canon ending. I'm nervous for these two lol.

I've been reading this story for a while now and I'm on chapter 16. So far the story is great. I cant stop reading this. Aurther acts just like rrd2 and is never out of character. This story is just beautiful.

Man, I really hope Arthur brings back a huge buck and some rabbits before disappearing in the night with Emma. I’ve loved this story since the beginning, but Arthur’s constant reluctance is becoming annoying. Nonetheless, you did an excellent job with this chapter.