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Love it . cant Wang forma more

Hope for more soon!

Hello! I couldnt review the last chapters...but now read everything!
Charles! arg! Poor Esme! in the last chapter I thought she became a vampire!
I hoping that you move is going well!

See you soon!

Aww loved it!

13. Chapter 12.
Cpov
Esme Cullens That Dawn Read Spier She suffered a cut on her face and then suddenly a Machine healed her She was bruised and abuse Charles by orders of our planet you are Vre'kasht don't get near of her Again Hello Police Take him To The biggest Jail ever built then suddenly Sis She is losing blood very badly what this Carlisle Cullen the 2nd her Half-blood son of Apollo is a Hybrid Then Father saved Mother his very first words he was very small Dawn I Made you our son's Gomijok what it means Nursemaid in the Language of the Klingons you fought him Esme is dying Turn her at once then I Bit her harder then suddenly too late Venom enterd herself was Screaming at me in Klingonese dialects then it was still then a most Amazing thing had altered herself began to turn the Police took him away was locked forever in time our son began Aging to look at Seven years old Esme looked radiant but more beautfiul hair looked more firmer then her own eyes were Red as Falkor the Luck Dragon then it happened first hunt after She Married us/Cullens witnessed was private from the Vulcans now Came us/they were Gone Carlisle jr was different but it happened Herself was my wife forever more that added both to my coven oh he's what Growing bigger Auntie Uncle oh man he's young I am still Seven please he did Hunt Animals was with Venom then had manners of a Gentleman Uncle yes that moved from here from Sakuras flaying as years gone by Our son began to Age like Crazy in time He was now a teenager fully grown was late for High School we Moved to Forks, Washington was our new state that Carlisle Jr was a young adult Edward found love in a Girl Isabella so he Found Bree Tanner in time with them expanding then IVF Biting with help blew up then sliced freely Pierced with them completed then too late Tore freely Sliced with sixth more then Motionless brought there they breed more from help they kept a very low one were All of them then ASnapped freely but with three mated ones and Pets/young deformed then ashes but As all of guards drained bitten them/us/they then slain from here then stolen from here wee Murdered buried by them then too late us/they were different after first hunt again was adult hunt then too late in time Asleep then Sliced freely three made Immortal beings were with hybrids followed were made Eternal people Blimp a planet with a telepathic race of Extraterrestrials the Betazoids: BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE UP! BAJOR CRYSTAL POWER MIRI CRYSTAL POWER DELTA CRYSTAL POWER DENEB CRYSTAL POWER CESTUS CRYSTAL POWER! RIGEL CRYSTAL POWER HELLGUARD CRYSTAL POWER MINTAKA CRYSTAL POWER ANDORIA CRYSTAL POWER KLING CRYSTAL POWER VENTAX CRYSTAL CRYSTAL POWER! VENUS CRYSTAL POWER JUPITER CRYSTAL POWER MARS CRYSTAL POWER MERCURY CRYSTAL POWER NEPTUNE CRYSTAL POWER URANUS CRYSTAL POWER SATURN CRYSTAL POWER! PLUTO CRYSTAL POWER The two yelled MAKE-UP! With them suddenly glowing more differently Then suddenly Into lights of their own planetary powers that Sliced with us/them then suddenly truest ascension then brought bodies killed then lost from here Stop right there evildoers From the Moon of Earth the pretty suited soldier of love and justice guardian of Mystery mistress of Judgement on the behalf of the Neo-White Moon Kingdom I Right Wrongs and Triumphs over Evil that means YOU! SO US NEGATRASH! blinking from here us/they were Vampire Slaying/Hunting Super Sailor Soldiers/Knights from the Almighty Crystal Palace from Crystal Tokyo, Japan bred for battle and peace and victory but too late smashed freely then thjen Sliced now too late brought there good they have stopped aging for real then ashes lost from here.

I loved it!

I really like your story, it's interesting!

Poor Esme. I hope CJ is alright. ..

Oh my gosh! I need to know what happens! The suspense is killing me. Hop Carlisle and Edward find her still alive.

Please update soon...I just have to know what happens next! I hope Edward and Carlisle are fast enough.

I hope Edward or Carlisle get there in time to save her!

That chapter is very sweet at the end.

Just wondering if this story is set in the 1920s, or if it is current day. There's a number of things mentioned that either wouldn't have existed or wouldn't have happened in the 1920s, so I'm thinking perhaps it is current day.

OMG I cant believe I miss two chapters!
I really love it the bonding between Carlisle and the baby.