Please please please release a new chapter, this is both funny and entertaining and i love it

EXCELLENT use of the 'excerpt' in their argument! I like this start, and look forward to seeing what you do with the rest of the story.

IT'S REALLY REALLY GOOD! definitely keep it up! I'll be looking forward to an update:)

I absolutely LOVE this! The writing is so amazing and the verb tense- wowwww I could never write in present tense like that, so kudos to you! Again, this is amazing, and I’m looking forward to the next chapters. Also awesome characterization for them!

This story is very well written aside from a few spelling/grammatical errors. Im hoping that you don’t have the usual cliche storyline and maybe add something different. I cant wait for ur next update!

Loved it, please continue!