Reviews for Jump Chain Gothic 6 - Star Wars
Coreymcwhirter chapter 10 . 4/27
Couldn't he spend as much time as he wanted in the dilation field this jump and not have it effect his overall time in this universe? If I recall correctly, the drawback he took said they'd be there until the day Luke and Leia were supposed to be born. Which means they have a fixed date they leave on instead of it just happening when the time limit runs out.
AnthonyR89 chapter 10 . 4/9
Pretty sure C'boath was already dead at this point.
AnthonyR89 chapter 6 . 4/9
Dude, you're not going to include any mass effect characters in your clone army? Even putting aside Sheppard, there's Thane, Garrus, Mordin, and Wrex.
AnthonyR89 chapter 1 . 4/8
I skipped the last story. Was never interested in the Merlin tv show.
Kaiya Azure chapter 10 . 10/12/2019
That's one way to remove a troublesome Jedi. Though one would think C'boath would report to the Jedi Council before venturing off to other galaxies. Still, I wonder what if anything Gothic might do about Thrawn.
Kaiya Azure chapter 2 . 10/12/2019
Probably for the best that Gothic didn't say "All too easy." Though I wonder what he'll do about the Scimitar?
bennibob chapter 10 . 9/19/2019
tis a good story, really hope you come back to it soon, I do love star wars and wanted to read some hutt war stuff
Gon Freaks chapter 5 . 9/9/2019
I don't see the logic in giving all his technology away in information like that especially to Dooku. Way to easy to get information from this guy. When someone asks such personal questions about you... you do not tell them everything, you say none of your business. Especially for someone you just met in person.
bavalos chapter 10 . 7/12/2019
Good story. I absolutely live the Star Wars 7niverse and hope you continue the adventure here.
bavalos chapter 5 . 7/12/2019
I like it. It would be nice to steer Dooku down a more lighter path. He was an excellent statesman and a decently powerful force user. He turned dark during a very turbulent, emotional, and uncertain point in his life. Even then he had at least decently okay intentions, but they were corrupted by an immensely powerful individual. Not to mention that I think Palpatine also gave hints of the extra galactic invasion
Right What Is Wrong chapter 2 . 6/19/2019
Isn't it annoying when Companions have excess CP? It throws a real wrench in the plot when you come up with a good Jumper build with Companions, then realize the Companions could take their own broken mini-combos...

Interesting logic. Nice disposal of a Sith Lord. I guess he doesn't have his clones active because he hasn't yet made inroads with Kamino? In that case - good riddance, Palpy! The galaxy is so much better off without you!
Right What Is Wrong chapter 1 . 6/19/2019
Your formatting could use a bit of work. In your build notes, it would be helpful to either put a divider before each companion's build or boldface their names so it's easier to see, at a glance, where each build begins.

I thought an implication from KOTOR canon was that Tatooine is cursed - settlements spring up, then fall apart over the next few decades until the settlers abandon the planet, whereupon new settlers eventually return and begin the cycle anew. Given that it was glassed by the Dark-Side-wielding Infinite Empire, it may be a literal in-universe curse. I may just be reading too much into that, though...

What perk(s) are you using to build up Tatooine, anyway? I understand the time dilation field, but where are you getting the resources/skills to build with the resources you have? Just curious.

Good choice on not Companion-ing Anakin. Honestly, the only way I can see him in Jumpchain is if the author elects to have him be the Jumper. (Preferably before the beginning of AOTC, otherwise he'd be too hung up on Padme to be much use.) He's way too impetuous and aggressive to be anyone's sidekick.

Interesting choices of companions.

Good to see more Jumpchain fics.
LuluViBritania chapter 6 . 5/16/2019
Wow for awhile i thought he had pregrown those Asari to create a clone Army of Sexy and Deadly Blue Babes.(sighs at the lost oppotunity)
125b chapter 10 . 4/16/2019
Kind of boring compared to your others.
Hadrian.Caeser chapter 10 . 3/31/2019
Nice
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