Poor Angel. That looked like it really hurt her.
Devourer Grim sound pretty creepy.
Your also really good at making cliffhangers, too.

Oh wow. Angel is hurt, there's family drama abound, and Guendolen and Jurabi are having... issues, but also kinda getting along? There is a lot going on, I'm not surprised you're breaking it up into two parts! Seeing the different views and the clashing beliefs is so cool! You've done an excellent job here! Well done! I look forward seeing what happens next.

Angel didn't do good, but tha thankfully everything will be mostly okay besides some trauma regarding her Papa. That's quite sad.

Possible Grimmificafion is serious business.

Everyone has their own secrets, I wonder what would be the other characters hidden and dark past? This is why I like misterious stuff so much, leaves lot of room for possible theories regarding it.

Some rock paper scissors shenanigans, people acting like dumbass teenagers, that's good, they're still mostly just kids, I'll say! They gotta have some fun.

Backstory and a little flashback for Grenny, not much but I assume it will have some more info the next chapter, most likely so.

This is quite big as it is so I understand why it had to be separated in two parts.

Light vs Dark Guardian Battlemania 2020, place your bets, everyone!

I completely forgot about this one! It's been so long, I'm glad to see it's back! I'll need to go back and reread it anyway, but I will definitely do so, since there's been heavy edits. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, by the way! The dynamics and how everyone interacted with each other, was absolutely fantastic.

The last bit has me worried, so many enemies in one place, and many of them with knowledge of our heroes. Whether by reputation or personal, though neither is very good. I can see some marked improvements in your writing, and while it was good before, now it's better! You've done a marvelous job, and I look forward to seeing how this plays out. Until next time!

Toodles!

Nice chapter. Looking forward to reading what sort of changes your add too.

Out of control bloodied Berserker Dourado is his second best aesthetic.

It's nice to see them working out together to take out the Grimm, glad the Director came to help too instead of just watching it all unfold, like a King that fights alongside his Pawns.

I was really looking forward for this update. The redone previous chapters were very good as a placeholder for this, even having some new and exciting stuff. But this is 200% new so I was quite hyped!

This was a great chapter to see how the class being separated into their single groups. That was great and seeing how each of them work was also great. I’m willing to wait on the chapters since you do a great job and don’t mind you retooling and reforming the story here and there, just if you have anything to say about my character, don’t be afraid to dm me.

You did a great job with Lynae and her affinity to Lightning and her power. Her and Angel working on a team together makes a lot of sense and I have a feeling they will get closer as time goes on. The others did great as well, but I’m of course curious about the four we didn’t learn much about. Learning bits and pieces of their stories here is great and can’t wait.

Also seeing how also each duo is compromise of 1 rare dust and 1 common dust: Dark & Fire, Lightning & Water, Blood & Wind, Light & Earth. I think each dust fits the character corresponding well and can’t wait to see how they’ll do in the second part.

Keep up the amazing work.

Whoop! Good to see you again! I absolutely adored this chapter, we got to see more of the characters in a more complete way, and they are all pretty awesome. I was grinning the whole way through this chapter and was delighted by Acacia and Jack's interactions, they are both so private and secretive, it's gonna take a loooong time or them to settle into each other and learn to trust each other implicitly.

Still, I cannot wait to see them come into their own and learn each other. And learning more of the others is gonna be one hell of a ride. Oh man the first time the pairs defend each other? That's gonna be fun.

Nathan and Seraph working together like a well-oiled machine, and acting like slightly awkward brothers who haven't seen each other in a long time.

Angel and Lynae are a good partnership, strong and decisive matched with the cautious and strategic. I adore how easy Lynae is with complimenting Angel, and how nice Angel is.

Guendolen and Dourado are an interesting pair, and I think they have more work to do in the case of teamwork than the others. Oof, I do not envy them.

The pre-pretest was fun and enjoyable, and the fights were pretty cool. I can't wait to see what happens next! I get that it'll take longer and you should take your time, the worst thing is to get burnt out with a story you really enjoy.

See ya next time! You should be proud of what you've done!

Honestly, I would rather wait for months for a good chapter then one week for aconstant update of badly written half assed chapters, so the wait doesn't bother me at all!

Acacia asking Dourado to help her and Jack in Biology made me think of Sinful things, I'm a degenerate gal.

Also, it makes sense Grimm Biology is his best subject, considering WHY he choose to fight.

Guendolen shall now only by addressed by me as Grenny.

They have the possibility of being a great due, Dourado has an almost unlimited pool of aura and stamina, and his semblance can come in handy.

Your choice of giving Dourado Earth Dust skills was quite exquisite to me considering he is supposed to 'master' lighting dust, even his tattoos are infused with it, nonetheless, a good and interesting choice, also, Gloria Eterna is not a Greatsword, it's a Great Spearsword, yes, that's a thing, and the Tower Shield is not part of Gloria Eterna.

And please, do take your time to perfect the worldbuilding and to rewrite and polish previous chapters, I'll certainly not complaining when it comes to an even better quality in future chapters!

The group's dynastic is pretty neat. I also think that Guendolen sounds like an interesting character. Same with the blood dust user. All in all, it felt like a good chapter to me. :)

So I took a really long time to read these chapters because college and life and what I want to say is: Wow! I loved all three of these chapters and I can’t wait for more of them. Watching characters like Seraph, Angel & Lynae grow close with Nathan is great and I can’t wait to see the chemistry with the other four.

Pumping out this many chapters that long in such a short time is impressive and I’m more attached to all these characters.

You did a wonderful job describing Lynae’s semblance and it activating and showing off her power. Keep up the great work and I can’t wait for the next chapter.

Dang I really like these little character arcs. They're really helping me get a better picture of the characters. My only thing is I didn't expect any of them to open up so quickly, especially to Nathan of all people. However, I found I actually liked that they opened up to Nathan. It was kinda cute. Angel was really the only one who surprised me since her initial reaction to Nathan was anything but good. Also I love the mom energy Aoife gives off. I do hope she finds a healthy way to move on with the deaths of her students as well as being able to meet the only surviving member of her team. But good job with the story and how fast you uploaded. Good luck writing!

Lynae backstory is pretty interesting...That last part with Nathan has me a bit worried though.

Would You like to pledge to protect Angel?

[YES[. [NO]

You choose [YES]

You know, it's quite wholesome to imagine Dourago saying the things he say in Jotaro voice, I'm still waiting a sudden "Good grief" any time now.

Can't go around losing your temper during a sparring match!

I love this chapter. I really like how each character is getting their own mini arc that tells their backstory. As someone who is writing an SYOC. It seems to be a good way to put it all down and move the plot beyond the characters if that makes sense. Either way poor Angel. I really felt her and Nathan's connection here. Good job. I have to take a look at those character models.