Reviews for Fascination
Constantinest chapter 5 . 5/16
Ahh this chapter really short u.u but i still want to read more... love this ideas and love this fic
Constantinest chapter 4 . 5/16
Why this story too short i want read more because this story really interesting
Constantinest chapter 3 . 5/16
Yes accept it sakuraa... accept the mission this story is really interesting
Constantinest chapter 2 . 5/16
Love when temari say shukaku samaa.. she afraid but at the same time she care to gaara love this
Constantinest chapter 1 . 5/16
Wow.. make gaara sleep without activating bijuu sounds interesting
tiny.sakura chapter 2 . 4/20
Okay, so I’m definitely convinced Shukaku is going to want to claim Sakura as his mate.
tiny.sakura chapter 1 . 4/20
Oh god. Oh god. IM NOT BREATHING.
Hyuuga Tenten n.n chapter 4 . 2/15/2019
Christ, forgive me for letting so many chapters go by, but in reality they are so short that I was even happy to let some accumulate, so I managed to kill some of the will of this story. I'm loving it, the premise is very good and I'm dying of curiosity to see what comes next. You're doing a great job, my only complaint is: bigger chapters!
kazuyaryo chapter 4 . 2/9/2019
A great charter.
Nanami chapter 4 . 2/8/2019
Hello dear author, I want to apologize for writing so far, I was out of town and I did not have time to admire the beauty of your work so far, I was sold with being able to read two chapters at once, I am happy, I like the development that you are doing with the character of Gaara, I am eager to read more of your prose, also please do not compare your prose with any, yours has too beautiful a quality to compare, it is beautiful to see how the authors grow in their writing, yours is great, I apologize for just writing in this chapter a review of how beautiful your work is and how I admire the punctuality, but I'm a bit rushed so I hope you receive this comment for the value of the two chapters that I read, thank you really for writing this beautiful rig. We will read.

Live The GaaSaku Forever!
Saskiel chapter 4 . 2/7/2019
This chapter was lovely. It did feel slightly different then the previous ones and I would say for sure that it was better. It might just be my imagination and the fact that I don't re-read the chapters when new one comes out (so while I remember what happened, I might not remember exactly how you described it) it feels like you are able to express what you want faster while it still reads very vividly and it's easy to imagine in my head.

I'm very much looking forward the festivals, Suna traditions would be interesting to see. I'm also interested in how you will approach them. Will you make them up completely or will you maybe draw from history of Egyptian and Middle Eastern countries?

I do also have to wonder if you are planning to do a time skip at some point? I know you said that this is still early in the story and I get that we will need to see their friendship develop (and I'm all for it and looking forward to it). But they are still rather young and.. Well.. I like my flirting and teasing and stuff xD so I'd just like to know if you are planning on that at some point?

In the meantime I hope you are having a great day!
DetyDuns chapter 3 . 2/4/2019
Just read the three chapters and it looks like a really interesting idea! I always like to read stories set during the time skip cause they give a fresh outlook and if is a GaaSaku even better! I'll be looking forward to the next chapters :)
Saskiel chapter 3 . 2/3/2019
Sorry I did not review your last chapter, I read it and really liked it, but I fell asleep instantly after and forgot in the morning and then stuff got busy xD

You said you have a poll on your profile, on my phone that always seems to be broken, so I'll just reply here. I think you should update once a week, even if it's shorter. And that is mostly because I believe in practicing what you like doing frequently.. Therefore I think it would be good for you from that perspective!

About this chapter, it was great. I also see Gaara as a very smart person who knows his way around words. It makes for a better contrast to when he would only say things like Sand coffin, haha. And you made it very clear that he is indeed capable of having a mature conversation, it was great to read!

Looking forward to what the story holds next, but for now, have yourself an amazing day!
kazuyaryo chapter 3 . 2/3/2019
It really was a great chapter
I will wait patiently for the continuation
Thank you for writing.
Dobbyhasnomastr chapter 3 . 2/3/2019
I feel like this chapter had some necessary wharacter building. I hope to see more soon
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