heh, that'll teach Naruto that sometimes he needs to be more assertive.

Oh very clever ruse on both sides.

Just read the entire story so far, you should definitley go back and place marks to show when people are speaking, when I first started to read I got confused at points because I didn't who was talking.

Ah so he finally remembered the letter. Good timing hopefully.

Heh, yeah someone like naruto who always pushing to make himself better and keep others safe would have a very hard time acknowledging that he actually has limits. And even more trouble admitting when he's pushed too close, let alone too far.

Hm, very interesting. They still chose to hide themselves. Of course, they don't know these people yet so it's understandable. Smart fights, by the way. Quick, easy to follow and with enough detail. Very good.

Ah, glad to see their 2nd foray into helping Kiri is going better for the moment.

Heh, sneaky, sneaky old man...

Go back to school to take English classes again and learn how to use proper grammar

Hahah, did Naruto just stumble across a distant family member? And how long before they discover it, or will they?

Naruto REALLY needs a change of clothes.. sort of like Jirayas but more Kimono style with reds, yellows, orange, and maybe black colors. Oh, maybe let his hair grow out.

Ah, little tidbits here and there...

Yes, talk no jutsu, truly without limit.

Hm, so did the just retreat or were they the distraction?

Well that was certainly a fortuitous meeting. Looks like Nartuo's luck is holding.