goodness, this is one of my favorite things i have ever read! i love jefftony, and the way you portray it here is so cute, but also very realistic with the anxiety jeff is feeling. the descriptions say a lot, but without saying too much. i want you to know that you have a talent, so be proud!

What we have here is some potentially cursed material. Well, the prose is great and the characterization of our boy is commendable: pulling out so much out of so little is always something that replicates the lazy but awesome character development in the Mother series: building off out of what you perceive their experienced to be. This story is a prime example of it, and it's awfully well done. Great work!