Reviews for Razor |
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Guest chapter 2 . 1/24/2019 You did an excellent job writing this story. However it really seemed to be quite dragged out. You probably could have written this in like 3 or 4 chapters not 12. I noticed a couple of points that really weren’t important that could be taken out as they mean nothing to the story. I do love the construction of the plot line thought the early chapters but over time it got quite boring. |