this story is riddled with errors across the board, although the idea was nice! I particularly liked the hot scene between Master of Ceremonies and Head Gamemaker, it was very saucy. And Sunny's kind of chill, I hope he's fine! Shame you discontinued it, but, what can you do.

just delete this stupid story

Oooh! Watch out for Jackson! Damn. Great chap!

SHIRO I HAVE THE SAME FRICKEN PROBLEM AS YOU BWAHAHAH

I’d totally submit to your partial! I need to catch up on reviewing hehe

YASSSSSSSSSSS DAISYYYYYYYYYYYY

Omg I love her. She needs to learn so much though my stupid little introverted baby

Kiwano seemed... interesting. I don't know what to make of him, but I'm sure we'll get to see the rest of his backstory soon. I DO want to know why he's racist. And what sort of trouble beating a Peacekeeper's kid got him into.

This was a good chapter :D I like the little short part with the mentor, where we get to see the tributes interact just a touch. It's a nice addition to the rest of the story.

Hi! Fabulous update; Also, I apologize if I’ve been less active when it comes to reviewing lately!

Daisy-aw, she's so sweet! Honestly she's probably going to die in the bloodbath but she's still adorable! She's not only peaceful but selfless as well, which is something I would admire in a real person.
Kiwano-he's...strange. I don't like him though. I don't think his actions are excusable. Maybe once we figure out exactly what happened in his past I will like him. But now he's a no for me.
Ooh, a partial! I'll def be submitting to that and hopefully I will make someone better than whatever the hell I was thinking with Akila.
I absolutely prefer Daisy.

Hey Shiro! I just want to let you know Freezing Hot has been updated recently, so you may want to check up on all the latest buzz! :)

Okay, so Eden's a creep. I mean, I do feel for him, because he doesn't really understand love, never having had much of it himself, but I think there are some basic principles of human conduct that he should understand by this point in his life. Standing by to learn more.

I'm not sure what I think of Leo yet. I mean, I can definitely see the integrity, but there's just so much anger there. I'm not sure what I'll think of her yet, but I do really love how good and bad aren't quite black and white opposites here; everyone's human, a little bit of both.

OOF June 5th. I think I'm the same here, actually, but it's STILL a big oof.

All right, Bianca will probably last longer, but I hope Fennel lasts longer. He has more potential growth and learning, from what I can see (and he reminds me of Theo, from my story, who's beginning to get some development!). Both of these are potential Bloodbaths - they're twelve-year-olds from Twelve, so it's always an option.

Taking your time between chapters is fine! Sometimes they're hard to write. Sometimes they're plain boring. Whatever the reason, it's all fine!

Super excited for Eleven :D:D

Aaaaaaaaaaaa! This is really really good! I think Bianca will last longer, but I really like the two of them. Unfortunately, I think they both may die in the bloodbath due to their young age. Then again, the bloodbath spares nobody.

Bianca-wow, she's definitely selfish. I'll give her that. She's just looking out for her own skin, I guess... but that doesn't mean she has to be a bitch about it, right?
Fennel-oh, he's going down in the Bloodbath. No doubt about it. He's not exactly what I imagined for hope, but that's perfectly fine. He's really cool.
School ends on July 5th for you? That sucks. I've got two more days, so I can't really get what that feels like but... good luck.

Woot! Sorry I'm getting here so late, I totally didn't notice this update (someone else updated around the same time, so this one got missed :(). But I'm here now! Aline seems pretty cool, and Reggie isn't necessarily alliance-less - he and Vale could get together or they could just kick Aline altogether. I look forward to seeing more chapters, and yours are always awesome. See ya later!

Aline kinda annoys me. I know pride is her thing but... damn she hot-headed. Awesome update!

Ohh I love Aline! She’s super interesting. I mean, she’s a dick, but so's my babey Vale so.

Reginald seems great as well- he’s a sweetheart. Maybe he, Thethys and Vale will make like. A “rejected-from-the-Careers” Alliance? I hope he goes far. Then again I hope all these children go far haha