awesome

I agree WHUMP YEAH! I'm glad they wrapped up the Matty/Ethan thing. I'm glad they gave Matty her own story line. I thought the first episode with Ethan was much more hard hitting-when Jack hugged her I was on the floor sobbing. This one seemed to rehash old stuff. I love seeing Jack and Matty on a road trip though and I loved Jack giving Matty advice. I just didn't find the story line compelling. Now Mac, Boze, and Riley in the woods-Perfection. I hope they go with this kind of story. They make a great team, and if we have to lose Jack we should at least have that. Anyway, thanks for the cheese! Love, love, love. Thank you.

Yay! I love to see you writing more, and this is a wonderful little tag. Thank you :)

excellent tags to the episode.
i definitely missed that mac and jack content so this hit the spot, and i like how you explained the gap in between the gang being together and then mac up and vanishing.
haha i almost forgot about crush... very obviously watched that one for lucas, because insert grimace emoji here, but damn if it didn’t make me respect his acting even more. i’m such a wimp though, could barely watch that whole last part... would be interesting to see what you do with that prompt though.

I loved this episode so much but it was missing Mac going to the hospital. Then I found your story and it conclued it for me. Thank you! Also Jack saying that he has a bad feeling about the guy in the photo with us knowing that his character leaving just freaks me out. We know Jack won't leave Mac unless he dies.

Loved your tags! I think they went perfectly with the episode. In fact, it seemed like I was watching deleted scenes to the actual show. And, yes, this was one of my favorite episodes! Great character building all around, great bonding, but especially, great Mac whump! And he looked too delicious in his outdoor gear! Great job with this! Good luck with school, though I don’t think you’ll have any trouble with fictional writing, as you’re writing on here shows how talented you are. And if your teacher/professor is reading this, I know she’ll realize, if she hasn’t already from your school assignments, what an exceptional writer you are. And thanks for the little note about possibly trying the Macgyver doc based on ‘Crush’. I hope you get a chance to write it, but if not, I’m enjoying the stories you do put out.

So cute. Very sweet. My favorite part in last night's episode was when Riley ran to Mac and touched his face then cradled his hand for dear life. That was my favorite. I also liked Riley remembering all the stuff Mac does and does them herself.

I totally agree with you, last nights episode was AMAZING! My only complaint was that Mac got shot way too late in the episode, lol!
Great story, but at least one of the bad guys should still be alive. The one who was sent back to take out Riley & Bozer should be alive, and possibly the head bad dude (Gino?) It didn’t address his aliveness after Mac threw fire in his face, and conked him on the head with the rock. I like to think he’s still alive so Jack can shoot him! Ok this leads me to my chief complaint about this fic, it was too short! We need to see them dragging him through the woods, the helicopter ride, and then more of the hospital with his hurt hand & leg (hehe now he has matching scars on both legs) sorry, I digress. Great job!

I LOVED the episode! The part where Riley and Bozer find Mac passed out, made my heart clench! :-)

Ikr! Why can't they show whump as good as h5o?

thanks so much for a hospital scene! I do wish they would show more often the aftermath of these big whump like episodes...

Great story. Love Macgyver. I wish they would show more of the aftermath of the episodes. Maybe the writers should read some fan fiction. Keep up the good work. Thanks for your stories.