This made me laugh so hard. I love sarcastic Sirius

Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #1

Examiner: Amber

Grade: 18/20 - EE (Exceeds Expectations)

Feedback: "I loved that you managed to keep the Marauders in character despite the AU and the obvious changes. They still felt completely real. Their personalities came through nicely. Descriptions were great. You set the scene well here. I've read plenty of rockstar!AUs, but never like this. You found a way to make it completely your own. The interactions were great. I think my favorite thing is that you made Sirius seem to not like James, and it didn't feel OOC. You made it completely natural. Even with this being a longer fic, the pacing was great. It didn't seem to drag or anything. Dialogue and prose were balanced nicely. The prompt was used originally and explored in depth. I like that you used it in a more subtle way. I loved the complexity here. Each detail seemed to be well thought out, and it showed. You obviously took a lot of care in writing this. I didn't notice any plot holes, and everything felt resolved. This was enjoyable. There was enough drama and romance and friendship to hook me instantly, and you kept my attention throughout. This would easily appeal to Wolfstar fans far and wide. Spelling and grammar were mostly great. There were several instances, however, where you had "/" around a word, as if for emphasis, and it was quite jarring. This was over the word max, so I have to keep the extra point. :("

I really love it and enjoy a lot with this chapter I need more 3 please

This was too funny and adorable! Sirius isn't in a good situation, but he's got his humour about him.

Sirius constantly getting James's name wrong is brilliant. The line where he told James to get a sexy cardigan so he'll pay attention to him is priceless!

I also loved Sirius's absolute confidence that Remus will get groupies that will try to steal him. I can just picture Remus's reaction of disbelief if he ever heard this.

He knew James name all along. He was just messing with him.

Aww. Poor Sirius. I don’t blame him for running away like he did. I’m glad Remus heard him and found him. They needed him and he needed them. Those two are going to cause such a ship with their fans, much like they do now lol. This was a great story. Good work.

Aww cute story, Sirius is really cool

You were writing a story once called ‘Where It Ends And Where It Begins’ which you promisef to finish, AND it ended on a cliffhanger, I really hope you will continue it. I really loved that one! 3

This is cute..I love it

"We need someone less dramatic. Hey, I know! Sirius! The drama queen extraordinare!" Haha.

I love how Sirius keeps changing James' name. :P

Oh, I love this story! It is most excellent!