I've just died and gone to heaven. I am loving this so much and I really like how you captured the characters in this. I'm looking forward to more from you.

Hola! Acabo de terminar de leer "Finding Immortal" así que no dudé en revisar las otras historias que has escrito
Me gustó mucho esta primera parte de la trilogía a la que pertenece este fic,definitivamente no entiendo a la gente que sólo comenta cosas sin sentido, aunque lo más probable es que haya sido por envidia, porque esta historia está muy bien escrita!
Continuaré leyendo la secuela :D
Saludos!

Sorry you received so much spam/trolls/hate reviews.

This writing is honestly some of the best I have read. It flows smoothly between the povs and the wording really captures their emotions.

Looking forward to the other parts. (Read all of this in a straight shot) let's see if j get through the next one before work ends ;p

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Great story. Please update soon. Only thing I didn't like was your overuse of italics. It was kinda annoying.

How adorable, romantic and...
if she doesn't have a stroke with Yamcha and her being sick tired with everything it's going on.
Vegeta really makes her some times feel safe .

I'm so sorry what you had to deal with that you had to repost this. how awful. I've read from,start to finish and I'm in tears again. i hope you can remember that I love this and it was nice to revisit and leave a review once again. I hope no one gives you grief over this or any of your fics.

I'm so glad that you have reposted this story! I'm such a fan of your trilogy!

why not using senzu bean?

Girl, don’t ever let people bring you down, and you know you can always reach out to me if you need to.