This story is so gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood. So very good. I was not expecting that! I cried! Thank you so very very very much! This story is the best!

I love this

My only confort after this chapter is that I'm not hundred percent certain she cast the killing curse at Pollux. After all, she would never mean it. My guess is that Hermione despite all of her changes still cares deeply about her friends and especially in that time. Ab is her conscience, Pollux her heart and Cole her soul. She needs the three of them if only for selfish reasons like keeping her sane and even then, she loves them. And considering you write a badass Hermione, she could have killed Cassandre Parkinson so that Pollux is the only Parkinson left so Tom would be forced to put up with him. Sure, Tom would be furious at her for a while but reluctantly impressed as well that she once again got her way. Killing Pollux isn't fair considering Malfoy just had to loose money that he would get back later no matter the symbolism. Definitely not the same than killing one's best friend.

Besides, Cassandre as the Parkinson heir would change the timeline too much. He'd serve Tom and marry Walburga thus making Sirius and Regulus unborn and Hermione hasn't yet changed the timeline in any way. Really, killing him is the best option.

I really hope I'm not wrong because otherwise, I'm living in denial. But despite your ability to write sad endings, I think this story needs Pollux.
Can't wait for the next chapter

I’m completely taken aback! I cannot fathom how hermione will bounce back from this, hate that she was taken by surprise when she’s usually when step ahead of everybody. Can’t wait for your next update :)

NOOoOOooooO T-T
Not Pollux...I never loved an OC more. And just when things seemed to be recovering on the Cole/Hermione/Pollux front (who am I kidding? I just wished things were getting better, but piece and tranquility are too delicate to last in that type of environment).
He was so happy-go-lucky playing with his patronus thinking of his brother ... he doesn't even remember the true name of Grace, does he?
That's just way too cruel :(
He trying to mend relationships, finally accepted his role and had first goals (with that Wizengamot vote). He definitely started recovering and now ... WHYYYY?!

Loved the chapter by the way, though I'm heartbroken now T-T

oh my gawd! I didn't expect it! noooo I need to know more!

it is BRILLIANT ! you thought everything through, i just hope it won't end like so many others. Keep going! Such an amaizing work.
I can't wait to see if she is going to be able to wake up a litle bit of humanity in tom

I'm in tears.

Ok gonna be honest but I think I have to take a break from this fic for a bit cause I’m so upset right now... he was actually my favorite oc character ever that I’ve read in a fic and yeah so I will be taking a break...( by the way you’re an amazing writer and it’s nothing personal just sad my favorite character just got killed off...)

I can’t believe you’ve done this to all of us. I’m heartbroken, I just can’t. Ugh I’m so fucking sad and angry like why would you do that to someone. Like duck that shit I hope Tom dies. I don’t want her to end up with him cause fuck him and his friends. Hermione needs to get her head out of her ass and see what she is doing is wrong. Like what was the point of coming back if things are going to be like this. Ughhhh!

This was heartwrenching. I feel like he never even had a chance. The pressure of being an heir. Him trying to dull reality with alcohol and the consequent addiction crippling him.
And the worst is the betrayal by his own brother and his final moments not knowing if one of your best friends had betrayed him as well.
I'm just so devastated. I was rooting for him, waiting for the turning point. The point where he'd finally get better.
I really didn't expect to start sobbing at the end.
None of the lads gave up something nearly as devastating as Hermione is about to. Torturing or killing a stranger is not nearly as bad as killing your best friend.
Keep up the good work but please don't kill us like that again. I'd enjoy Tom getting his comeuppance though.

My English is not very good but I will try. I've read many Tomiones and I always want a happy ending for them... But you know what? I want Tom to die, painfully, slowly, I want him to suffer and I want revenge. He f*cking played Hermione again, they all did. I'm so angry right now. Pollux, really? Like, really? Gosh, I love you and hate you at the same time (best compliment for a writer I believe). F*CK, you killed Pollux T_T that's not cool. Anyways, wonderful story, great story structure and plot.

Tom is rubbish. Regardless of that, putting myself in Hermione's shoes, I really didn't care. The Harry and Ron he knows are gone, but they are going to be born again. She can move on with that in mind. But Polux was too much. Sad it would have been if Milton died, even if it had been Cole; But not Polux. If I were Hermione I would send everything to hell. The story will no longer be the same. Everything became very scary. Silas and Thorus, Polux, knowing all the things that were happening around Hermione that she was not aware of. She was always outside of everything. That is depressing. I would like it to be revealed that she did in fact know, and that she wasn't actually Polux, just a poor bastard with polyjuice. Very very sad. I've already read stories with dark Tom's and that's why it didn't seem so crazy that he liked it. But I went too far. I do not like.

Even so I will be aware of how the story continues. Can you move on with someone like that? Polux brought some light to Hermione's entire dark life; now nothing is going to be the same.

I never felt so bad, not even when my cat died

First of all, this is a wonderfully brilliant, detailed, and intriguing story. Second, I really need to recover from the cliffhanger at the end of this story. I say cliffhanger because it will take the confirmation of Pollux’s death to convince me she actually went through with it.

If she really did kill Pollux, then I really will need to take a break from this story whether indefinitely or not. I love the fundamental core of Hermione but this act would be the death of her. I’m just hoping she is brilliant and bad ass enough to figure out a different solution.